The Blessing of the Snow
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Comment from lyenochka
Lovely two lines that captures the feeling of fresh falling snow. It's really calming and peaceful to watch the silent snow falling. I liked your rhyme and the assonance of "kiss, skin, within."
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Lovely two lines that captures the feeling of fresh falling snow. It's really calming and peaceful to watch the silent snow falling. I liked your rhyme and the assonance of "kiss, skin, within."
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Hi Helen. Thank you very much. This one was hard. I will have to think about this type of shortie a little more. :)
Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
Since I have moved to Phoenix from Las Cruces, NM I will not miss the cold and the snows. I hope you have a blessed Thanksgiving week.
Patricia
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Since I have moved to Phoenix from Las Cruces, NM I will not miss the cold and the snows. I hope you have a blessed Thanksgiving week.
Patricia
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Hello Patricia. Thank you very much for the lovely review. Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
Melissa
