Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

Such a beautiful presentation with those few words being so meaningful.
The picture above is endearing and the one below is awesomely beautiful.
Never let your dreams fade. Keep them foremost in your mind as you constantly strive toward your goal.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thank you very much. Your time and kind feedback are greatly valued and appreciated.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

this is so beautiful. The rose opens up and shows its beauty. you're definitely a great writer. Have you ever written a novel? Probably I should check your profile instead of asking you.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thank you very much, Rosemary. Your time and kind feedback are greatly valued and appreciated. I just write here for fun and keep all paid writing far removed from here and any connection to me since I prefer to keep my personal life as private as possible.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This style of poem favour a good aphorism such as this. I've read a few of these recently, and yours is up with the best of them. I hope it does well in the contest.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thanks so much, Tony! These shorties don't give one much to work with so I am thrilled you think it might hold its own in the herd.