The Buried Coffee Can
Hiding his money.44 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Well done. Good luck with this. I love story poems when written well, or they can be too long. This was warm, as well intriguing in a humorous way. I was waiting to see where the money had gone, or what twist was played. Hope this does well for you in the competition.
Well done.
Have a good week.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Well done. Good luck with this. I love story poems when written well, or they can be too long. This was warm, as well intriguing in a humorous way. I was waiting to see where the money had gone, or what twist was played. Hope this does well for you in the competition.
Well done.
Have a good week.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thanks, for the very nice review RG. You honor me with the six stars.
Again, thanks.
Comment from QC Poet
Great poem and story of an old man's distrust and being left alone by grown family. Thanks for Sharing your work and poetry, Good Luck to you in the Old man poem contest.
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Great poem and story of an old man's distrust and being left alone by grown family. Thanks for Sharing your work and poetry, Good Luck to you in the Old man poem contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from equestrik
I really enjoyed this write. It is fun to read with a lovely rhythm and cadence. I also love the story and figure it wasn't a bad way to go at all! Wonderful writing.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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I really enjoyed this write. It is fun to read with a lovely rhythm and cadence. I also love the story and figure it wasn't a bad way to go at all! Wonderful writing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you, very much, for the review and beautiful six stars, you honor me.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I think that it took a long time for people to trust banks, though in time most did. But over the years can you imagine how many coffee cans of money are buried all over the world that family members wither never found or didn't even know about. The poem flows very well. The rhythm and rhyme is perfect. Great job!
Patty
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I think that it took a long time for people to trust banks, though in time most did. But over the years can you imagine how many coffee cans of money are buried all over the world that family members wither never found or didn't even know about. The poem flows very well. The rhythm and rhyme is perfect. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, interesting, sad, and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem. I found the last stanza sad that
his children never found the coffee can. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork awesome and compliments these words.
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The author's words are descriptive, interesting, sad, and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem. I found the last stanza sad that
his children never found the coffee can. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your cowboy poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your words are well thought out, there's good rhymes, and you create great imagery. I could see everything you mentioned. Too bad families are like the way you wrote--more concerned with things and money than people and feelings.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a great job with your cowboy poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your words are well thought out, there's good rhymes, and you create great imagery. I could see everything you mentioned. Too bad families are like the way you wrote--more concerned with things and money than people and feelings.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading your Old Man Poem. It was very fitting that his children never did find "The Buried Coffee Can". You have a wonderful knack for story telling my friend.
Blessings
Janet
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I enjoyed reading your Old Man Poem. It was very fitting that his children never did find "The Buried Coffee Can". You have a wonderful knack for story telling my friend.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really enjoyed reading this poem/story contest entry. It's sad his children didn't care. I am guessing he was never there for them, being a cowboy and all, but still they should understand. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's one of the best I've read, I doubt you will need it, but good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this poem/story contest entry. It's sad his children didn't care. I am guessing he was never there for them, being a cowboy and all, but still they should understand. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's one of the best I've read, I doubt you will need it, but good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thanks Barbara, I appreciate you review and stars.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very good entry for the Old man poem contest. You made it sound like a true story, Willie. But then, you have so many old tales you used to post, so no surprise. Good luck.
Ralf
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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This is a very good entry for the Old man poem contest. You made it sound like a true story, Willie. But then, you have so many old tales you used to post, so no surprise. Good luck.
Ralf
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Ralf, as always dear friend, I appreciate your review and stars.
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed reading this poem, it flows well and has a very nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the ending and the evocative imagery you included. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I enjoyed reading this poem, it flows well and has a very nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the ending and the evocative imagery you included. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Oliver, I really appreciate your review and stars.
