Comment from apky

Excellent

This chapter/post is so full of action and adventure. And as always timely changes of scenes, great flow, perfect dialogue. Add to all that the killing suspense which drives the reader to keep on, wanting to know what happens next and to whom. The poker scene had me in stitches even as I cheered in sheer Schadenfreude.

Chewing my nails waiting for the next post.

Excellent writing, my friend.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you so much, Aki, next post is being worked on now. I'm glad you liked the poker scene, I had fun with that! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Out of sixes, darn it! She should have taken the poker with her. Bet it would have scared those idiot bullies to death. Hurry with the next chapter. I can't wait to see how she frees Joe. The tension is killing me.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

LOL! Yvonne, you are so funny. I've almost finished the next part. Veronica being invisible opens so many doors to play with. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying this book, thanks so much for all your support, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx

reply by damommy on 26-Jan-2018

You're welcome.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

OH my lady this part was excellently written and I loved the interaction and the humor that you used to make it flow. Very exciting

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Thank you so much, Barb. I'm really pleased you enjoyed this one too. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Sandra, Oh I am so excited .I read your authors notes and started your synopsis for book one and then thought I wonder if you are on kindle so googled you up and here I can by your book on my kindle ( a xmas present form my kids this year,.. As much as I love books I have found the kindle very handy I can keep it in my handbag to read if I am out or then resd in bed also ) so I am going to purchase your kindle version so I can read this great book I started ages ago reading your posts on FS but got too far behind) and now I will be able to get it . i think you are a terrific writer but I do miss your great poem also Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Oh, Christine, thank you so very much! What a wonderful review. You know how to put a smile on my face. I know I've been slack with my poetry lately, I must write some. I'm so pleased you are getting my Kindle version, I do hope you enjoy it. My son bought me a Kindle a while ago. They are handy for slipping in the bag and reading on the go. Thank you, again, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx

reply by Chrissy710 on 25-Jan-2018

Hi Sandra Yes I have purchased your book onto my kindle and will look forward to reading it ASAP..
I love my kindle was never going to get one but I am glad I have and now I can keep track of your writing.

Cheers Christinexx

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Bless your heart, thank you, Christine! :)) xx

reply by Chrissy710 on 26-Jan-2018

Oh Sandra I have spent the last couple of hours reading your great story up to when Veronica inhabits Alice for the first time ......... Cheers Christine

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, this is another outstanding chapter. I loved it. Oh, you do write it so well, and you have me sitting on the edge of the seat. I'm so glad I have a six left. You so deserve it. A big hug from a sunny Spain. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Thank you so much, Ulla, for the lovely stars and for your wonderful comments. You are soooo nice, my friend. Big hugs back for cold, dreary, wet England! lol. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

You chapters always flow so smoothly that they are a joy to read. I like the poker trick and will look forward to seeing how she handles Joe's situation. You picked a good point to continue this. Have great day, my friend. Sorry, I am all out of 6's

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

That is such a lovely review, Douglas, and never worry about a 6, your words more than make up for that! Thank you, my dear friend. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Iron pokers have a way of getting a fella's attention, even in the hands of a woman. And for me, it would always be best to see that the creeps get a few good wallops or ten. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Thank you, Ric. I would have given him a bit more of a wallop, too. Veronica was worried about upsetting the children, though I think Daveth wouldn't have worried, lol. Thank you for your lovely review, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Sandra, OK!!!!...good job with the poker stick....and glad Daveth is of to tell his mother what is going on...but very upset those goons hit Joe's face....they better hope they didn't leave any scars....they don't want to make me mad...my poor handsome, dark haired, smooth complexion...no zits...6 foot tall ...gorgeous light brown eyed lover...Hey...I can dream...and never say never...LOL...now go recuse my man...this a great chapter sweet girl...can hardly wait for the next...what Veronica has up her ghostly sleeve???...so very well written my wonderful writer and friend...love this picture....love you sooooo muches ...Linda xxoo

how is Ian doing????....and Sarah???...I hope they are doing well...as well as can be...say Hi for me...xxoo

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

LOL!!! Linda ... NO ZITS!!!! My hero's don't have ZITS! LOL!!! I think if I had a man like that, I'd never let him out, especially if I heard there was a flight from America due in, with a passenger by the name of Linda on it! You are so funny, my dear friend, you always give me a fit of the giggles. Thank you for this lovely review, my wondIerful friend. Love you lots, too.

Ian is having some tests done on his foot, the blisters have got worse. He's getting himself geared up for another op. We won't know until Tuesday. ~Sarah is doing fine, she still hasn't made her mind up about the mastectomy. I wish she would go for it, and then she'd be able to get on with the rest of her life. She is too young to waste it. They do amazing things these days.

I hope your mum is fine, and tell her I'll share Gibbs with her! lol. (I'm can be quite generous sometimes.) Big hugs, and lots of love! xxxx Sandra xx

reply by l.raven on 25-Jan-2018

LOL...well that's a relief...NO ZITS...and not to worry...you don't have to let him out...I'll just come in...LOL...and trusts me...my mother is 88 years old...she would fight to the finish for Gibbs...LOL...but her favorite was Jacob from Twilight...the movie...the wolf...she used to have his picture on her wall...my father just laughed at her...she said it looked like dad when he was younger...he would come in from outside at night...and tell her he saw Jacob on the first pasture...she would start laughing...and it made him smile...what a couple...

I am so sorry about Ian...I wonder why it keeps coming back...why it just doesn't heal...tell him I am thinking about him...and he always in my prayers...like you...I think Sarah should just get it done...but it is a big step...big hugs all around...and so much love...xxoo Linda

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

As always an amazingly well written piece of this continuing and exciting engaging story. This is beautifully written with talent and style. You write so well it is very easy to get caught up in the magnificent story. I love it and cannot wait to read more you really are an excellent writer. I enjoy your work so much and the characters are so realistic and well thought out. Pace and flow outstanding.Kindest regards and well done love Meia xx

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Goodness me, Meia, you have quite turned my head! Thank you so much for this wonderful review, my friend, you've really made my day! Thank you!! :) Sandra xx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

A very enjoyable chapter Sandra. It was full of activity and adventure. There was a high level of suspense which prompted the reader to read on, wanting more and more information. It has a great flow and you found just the right time to change scenes. Very well done, thanks. Oh--A slight mistake- when Daveth was about to leave the cottage you mentioned Joe instead, after Gladys had said she would bolt the door. Sorry. (smile)

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Don't say 'sorry', Alie, I'm grateful to you for spotting it!! Thank you so much for this lovely review, the help and just everything!! LOL. I'm glad you are still enjoying this story, my friend. Big hugs! :) Sandra xx

reply by aryr on 25-Jan-2018

You are so welcome Sandra, it truly is enjoyable and actually rather educational, my friend.