Autumn Picture Show
5-7-5 contest entry62 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautiful 5-7-5 about autumn which is truly beautiful. The only problem is it is followed by winter. A beautiful poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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This is a beautiful 5-7-5 about autumn which is truly beautiful. The only problem is it is followed by winter. A beautiful poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI Debbie, LOL...that's ok Debbie...I love Winter too...I find beauty in all the seasons...but I love the crystal in Winter...just not the bitter cold...LOL...but Autumn is beautiful as well....I came in second place...one vote from first...I can live with that...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...have a great evening...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good seasonal imagery.
-I like your comparison to the cinema;
that is very descriptive and different.
-A good entry, Linda, good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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-Very nice image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good seasonal imagery.
-I like your comparison to the cinema;
that is very descriptive and different.
-A good entry, Linda, good luck.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Pam, thank you so very much my sweet friend...so glad you like it....love Linda xxoo
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You are very welcome, Linda.
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smiling big...xxoo love
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Comment from Knighteagle
This is a great 5-7-5. Though I admit it's a show that I dread. It can be a beautiful show to watch, provided you don't have to clean up after the show. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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This is a great 5-7-5. Though I admit it's a show that I dread. It can be a beautiful show to watch, provided you don't have to clean up after the show. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI Knighteagle, LOL...it's ok if you like the snow...LOL...but it is a beautiful time of the year...thank you again...I am so grateful for the reviews...love Linda xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
A marvelous 5-7-5! I line the phrase, "a cinema of autumn." Great metaphor for the showy, colorful nature of Autumn as a movie picture show that all can enjoy. Well presented with an actual falling leaf!
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A marvelous 5-7-5! I line the phrase, "a cinema of autumn." Great metaphor for the showy, colorful nature of Autumn as a movie picture show that all can enjoy. Well presented with an actual falling leaf!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI lyenochka, thank you so much for a great review my sweet friend...I am so glad you like it...love you Linda xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a beautiful 5/7/5 poem for the writing prompt.
Excellent artwork and presentation.
Very creative from the title to the very end.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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This is a beautiful 5/7/5 poem for the writing prompt.
Excellent artwork and presentation.
Very creative from the title to the very end.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Janet, thank you so much for a great review my friend...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
The two seasons spring and Autumn, contrast with one another, both equally beautiful, one, new life, the other the passing of glory, beautifully written dear Linda, a fabulous entry in the 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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The two seasons spring and Autumn, contrast with one another, both equally beautiful, one, new life, the other the passing of glory, beautifully written dear Linda, a fabulous entry in the 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI Roy, what a wonderful way to look at these two beautiful seasons...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...Love Linda xxoo
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Well done Linda, good luck, dear friend, love you Roy
Comment from victor 66
Your poem reminds me so much of so many years ago when I would walk home from school and shuffle through leaves. Then there was the raking and burning of the leaves into the driveway or out in the street. The scent of burning leaves takes me back over sixty years to a different era. Thank you for the memory.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Your poem reminds me so much of so many years ago when I would walk home from school and shuffle through leaves. Then there was the raking and burning of the leaves into the driveway or out in the street. The scent of burning leaves takes me back over sixty years to a different era. Thank you for the memory.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Victor, so good to see you my friend...I know just what you are feeling...I do remember days just like that...I loved the smell of the leaves as they burned...it was part of the seasons...thank you for a wonderful review...and the memories...love Linda xxoo
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Again, you are most welcome, Linda.
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smiling big...xxoo love
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A smile is so nice, and frown is so depressing. If you're smiling, that's a god thing.
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yes it is...xxoo love
Comment from emptypage
Ahhh... the leaves went by so very quickly this year, and it looks like we are in for a really rough winter, but I have made progress in my feelings towards autumn. I used to hate it because it meant winter was coming and I do not love winter. Now I squeeze every piece of color out of the season before the grey of the winter months enshrouds me.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Ahhh... the leaves went by so very quickly this year, and it looks like we are in for a really rough winter, but I have made progress in my feelings towards autumn. I used to hate it because it meant winter was coming and I do not love winter. Now I squeeze every piece of color out of the season before the grey of the winter months enshrouds me.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Emptypage, I find there is beauty in all the months...you just have to like the cold...I love the snow...just not the bitter cold...Autumn is truly a beautiful time of the year...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from judiverse
That's a wonderful picture. One can make the connection between it and people watching the cinema of autumn (great description). I think your choice of amazed is excellent, too, because the autumn colors can be amazing. Your syllable count is as it should be. Best of luck in the contest with this lovely nature poem. judi
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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That's a wonderful picture. One can make the connection between it and people watching the cinema of autumn (great description). I think your choice of amazed is excellent, too, because the autumn colors can be amazing. Your syllable count is as it should be. Best of luck in the contest with this lovely nature poem. judi
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Judi, thank you so much for a wonderful review my sweet friend...I love the picture...and Autumn is so very beautiful...thank you for the best of luck...it came in second...love Linda xxoo
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HI, and Happy Saturday. You're welcome. I love autumn but the colors in Indiana were disappointing last fall. No sooner than leaves began to get some color than they began to fall. judi
Comment from johnwilson
This presentation is lovely--the perfect visual with the words to accompany it--very complete. For me, this type of poetry never works when I attempt penning it. To view a picture, devise words with the right syllable count, and have only three lines seems impossible. All I can say is Bravo, you did it! I would love to see a book with pictures and words just like yours.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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This presentation is lovely--the perfect visual with the words to accompany it--very complete. For me, this type of poetry never works when I attempt penning it. To view a picture, devise words with the right syllable count, and have only three lines seems impossible. All I can say is Bravo, you did it! I would love to see a book with pictures and words just like yours.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI John, so would I my friend...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo