Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Your dedications were beautiful, thank you.

I liked your writing, but maybe it would have more of an impact without the quotes and written as a poem?

Please, have a good day.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks and that's my style.
Ricky1024

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

'"Yes, my dad lost his only Son me, (than) his only wife, my mom but... (then)
This is a good poem but very sad and I felt the emotion behind it. Thank you for sharing. Is this about someone on here? I have been away for two weeks so am out of the loop.
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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

No Jay was only Eighteen. Him writing it was for impact.
Ricky1024

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about life and life after death and resurrection and spiritual existence of soul and more about feeling the existence following mortal death and rights; I liked.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks ever so much for visiting me and my Son Jay.
Ricky1024.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I commend your continual memorial in verse. I also read in this the encouragement that that physical parts of our loved ones can live on through organ donation. But praise be to God that even if we die in this world, we will live because of all Christ has done. Blessings.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Greater words never spoken.
You honor me and Jay and we thank you...
Ricky1024.

Comment from Charmisa Parker

Excellent

Very beautiful and detailed. Just by reading this reminds me of this song called: I'll go wherever you will go," which to me speaks a lot and brings the message about knowing that your loved ones are still there even if you can't see them.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks and welcome to me and you will always be amazed.
Ricky1024.

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

Wow! This is immediately breathtaking and certainly GRIPPING from the outset! It is unquestionably complex and demands a serious re-read to capture the full intent and details of the writing. I cannot offer anything to improve this work and thank the author for a truly unique experience. HIS GRAYNESS

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

An Honor for your kind thoughts and review...
Ricky and Jay.

reply by His Grayness on 21-Jun-2017

My joy Ricky! Thanks always! Vance

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

"I'm not here right now...
"But, I'm not very far...
"I'm in this place not far...
"As a Star...
"You'll feel this place...
"Take a moment and you'll see...
"Then you will know...
"Just Where I shall be...'
An unusual write as ever but very good. Well done kind regards Meia x

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks Meia for stopping by and enjoying me and Jay...
Ricky and Jay...

Comment from sunao

Excellent

Beautiful! Life is short and this is why we should live it to the fullest. Thank you so much for writing this and getting it off your chest. Please continue to spread awareness on how life should not be taken lightly. Have a blessed day!

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

As a representitve of ...
"The Gift of Life"
In a Mormon church in Philadelphia...
In Decembrer acreoss from the New temple...
Within an ears shout of Vine Street and the Gift of Life...
I gave my testimony on my losses and said...
Quote: That I was not there to promote death but life ...
And read off what I had just written called...
"The Gift of Life" and rocked those Priests..
Thanks again,
Ricky with the "Aaronic Priesthood with "the latter Day Saint Church of Jesus Christ".

Comment from apky

Excellent

I found a lot of very comforting and even philosophical words in this piece which I'd like to cherish and keep:

"You see...
"For people like Me...
"We are born to live...
"Die to give...
"Ashes to Ashes...
"Dust to Dust...
"No choice did I have...
"Sacrifice as I must...
"And, I must now leave and I'm authorized to spread this message ...
"Of Love...

Thanks you,
Apky

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017

Thanks apky for reviewing and entering within me...
Ricky and Jay...

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Wow hello friend I really enjoyed reading this piece I found it to be very deep and moving It is Well written and the structure flows very smoothly thank you so much for sharing this with us and God bless you

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

To honor is to respect...
What a young man did ...
So long ago in His style...
Thanks,
Ricky and Jay....