This Time - That Time 2
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Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't have too much trouble with the English slang, I only have to read it slower as not to get lost. LOL! I came to London a couple times to visit a girl I met here in America. A lovely girl, who talked so prim and proper while she was here, but when we got out on the town with all her friends, I couldn't understand a word. LOL! Thanks for another fine chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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I don't have too much trouble with the English slang, I only have to read it slower as not to get lost. LOL! I came to London a couple times to visit a girl I met here in America. A lovely girl, who talked so prim and proper while she was here, but when we got out on the town with all her friends, I couldn't understand a word. LOL! Thanks for another fine chapter. :-)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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I can quite believe it too. When the Londoner's get going, you have to listen closely to follow. LOL, my late mother-in-law was from the Cockney part of London, everything they said was in rhyming slang, ie: I'm going 'apples and pears- = I'm going upstairs. It's really fun. LOL. Thanks, Ric, for another of your lovely reviews. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Treischel
This story is moving along nicely, here in this chapter that reveals a glimpse of your mission. You have a wonderful imagination. Your characters seem realistic and believable. You keep curiosity involved.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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This story is moving along nicely, here in this chapter that reveals a glimpse of your mission. You have a wonderful imagination. Your characters seem realistic and believable. You keep curiosity involved.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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I'm delighted to know you are enjoying this sequel, Tom! Thank you so much for the lovely review, I really appreciate that. Biggest hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from royowen
So now the reason for Veronica's appearance in 1846 is manifestly obvious now. Daveth tells Veronica that his da' as he calls him, ( I thought "da' was a Jordy thing, Sandra.) has vanished when he touched Ann. She doesn't have a clue how she can help, but knows she wouldn't be there otherwise! But she encourages in that fact. Funny she should be there in spirit form. Well done Sandra, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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So now the reason for Veronica's appearance in 1846 is manifestly obvious now. Daveth tells Veronica that his da' as he calls him, ( I thought "da' was a Jordy thing, Sandra.) has vanished when he touched Ann. She doesn't have a clue how she can help, but knows she wouldn't be there otherwise! But she encourages in that fact. Funny she should be there in spirit form. Well done Sandra, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Hi Roy, thank you so much for still following my story. No, Da' is used in Cornwall, and I think it's common in Wales and Ireland too. Veronica will have her work cut out in this book, it's not just a case of listening and putting things right in here time. It's going to be very different. Thanks again, my dear friend, big hugs, Sandra xxx
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Most imaginative, set in the time that Margaret Snowdon sets hers.
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I love her story, Brady and Rosa have found each other again! Her society is a bit better off than mine, lol. xxxx
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Could be I think, heh heh, Sandra,
Comment from JDRBAR
Very good chapter. I read the last one and determined from that one to watch for this one. The conversation flows naturally and believably. Looking forward to the next one.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Very good chapter. I read the last one and determined from that one to watch for this one. The conversation flows naturally and believably. Looking forward to the next one.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Aww thank you, my friend, that is really lovely of you. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Curly Girly
Daveth is a likeable character and the accents are believable. He misses his dad and wants to know where he got to. It makes me wonder if the father was murdered. Let's hope that something in the time travel can change things so that he can be reunited with his dad.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
Nicole
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Daveth is a likeable character and the accents are believable. He misses his dad and wants to know where he got to. It makes me wonder if the father was murdered. Let's hope that something in the time travel can change things so that he can be reunited with his dad.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
Nicole
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, Nicole. Daveth is lovely, and he'll be in the story a fair bit. He's like Mildred, down to earth and charming. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend the story is building up very well now we know why veronica has been whisked back in time again and I cannot wait to see the story develop well done I enjoyed regards Jill
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Hello my friend the story is building up very well now we know why veronica has been whisked back in time again and I cannot wait to see the story develop well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Jill, for the lovely 6 stars! It's wonderful to know you will be travelling back with me again. Veronica will have her work cut out this time. Thank you again, my dear friend. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow what a twist, disappeared. Now this is going to be a new one. Just wondering, will she ever find out who is manipulating time and sending her places or is that going to be the start of each story like this one?
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Oh wow what a twist, disappeared. Now this is going to be a new one. Just wondering, will she ever find out who is manipulating time and sending her places or is that going to be the start of each story like this one?
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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The powers that be are trying to work that one out. Ideally, they don't want her to know, but it depends on how Veronica manages with what they give her to work with. Fun time ahead, not all funny though!! Thank you so much, Barb, for reading and reviewing this part. I do appreciate it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Fascinating and very well written. So Daveth's father went thru some kind of time portal where Ann was. Where did he end up? In Vernonica's era? Or somewhere between? Must say, I'm curious. :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Fascinating and very well written. So Daveth's father went thru some kind of time portal where Ann was. Where did he end up? In Vernonica's era? Or somewhere between? Must say, I'm curious. :)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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The silly man has gone and got himself lost! Isn't that typical of men!!! Now it means Veronica has got to go looking for him, Men!! LOL, thank you so much for the lovely six stars, dear friend. I really appreciate that. You get one of my super hugs now! Watch out, it's coming right at you!! :) xxxxx
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Aaaah! Knocked me off my feet, but I'm okay. Good to know I'm loved. :)
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LOL! I'm off to bed soon, so I'll be up bright and breezy for your next part, it's the first thing I look for. :) Night night, my friend. :) xx
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, what a story, and you just write it so well. It's such an interesting tale and I don't blame Veronica, being slightly worried to be sent that far back in time. I hope she can be of help. Well, I'm sure she will be. Can't wait to reading on. Hugs.
Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Hi Sandra, what a story, and you just write it so well. It's such an interesting tale and I don't blame Veronica, being slightly worried to be sent that far back in time. I hope she can be of help. Well, I'm sure she will be. Can't wait to reading on. Hugs.
Ulla xxx
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Aww, thanks, Ulla, for the lovely 6 stars!! It's going to be quite different to the first story, so lots for Veronica to sort out. I'm so pleased you are coming along with it. Big hug, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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Wouldn't want to miss it. I love the story line. xxx
Comment from frogbook
Oh, an interesting development with this disappearing Dad. Something tells me this is going to be one of your difficult twists that you will work out with us.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Oh, an interesting development with this disappearing Dad. Something tells me this is going to be one of your difficult twists that you will work out with us.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, JoAnn. Yes, it will have a few twists in it!! LOL. :) Sandra xx