Another Hospital Visit
Exactly 100 words...32 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Great story I really enjoyed reading it. It is interesting and it held my attention. It has a good ending filled with humor and your artwork choice goes well with your words.
angel123
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Great story I really enjoyed reading it. It is interesting and it held my attention. It has a good ending filled with humor and your artwork choice goes well with your words.
angel123
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you Angel for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate it very much. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from Bill Schott
That's what I was beginning to think. This is a funny story that allows us to watch the evidence of frequent accidents while together add up to a humorous, tongue-in-cheek ah-ha moment.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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That's what I was beginning to think. This is a funny story that allows us to watch the evidence of frequent accidents while together add up to a humorous, tongue-in-cheek ah-ha moment.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks Bill for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Poor old Bill is for the chop it seems. Sounds like bad luck to me all right. very taut, tight little write for the competition.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hi there,
Poor old Bill is for the chop it seems. Sounds like bad luck to me all right. very taut, tight little write for the competition.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks GMG for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from F. Wehr3
Sorry, I missed the voting on this contest. I thought this was well done for a flash piece and would have given it strong consideration. Very nicely done!
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Sorry, I missed the voting on this contest. I thought this was well done for a flash piece and would have given it strong consideration. Very nicely done!
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks Russell for your excellent review and consideration. It did win the contest. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from Maureen Sky
Cute, and with it comes the years of wisdom shining through, haha!
Hope all is well now. 100 words and with good subject matter. Nicely done and good luck!
M. Sky
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Cute, and with it comes the years of wisdom shining through, haha!
Hope all is well now. 100 words and with good subject matter. Nicely done and good luck!
M. Sky
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you Maureen for your excellent review and your good luck wish. It won the contest. Thanks again my friend...Bill
Comment from winnona
a well-written contest entry. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest very well.In a hundred words you managed to tell a whole stry of this couple's plight.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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a well-written contest entry. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest very well.In a hundred words you managed to tell a whole stry of this couple's plight.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you Winnona for your excellent review, I really appreciate it. Have a great weekend...Bill
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute story you have penned. It made me laugh as I read it. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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This is a very cute story you have penned. It made me laugh as I read it. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you Teri for your excellent review and good luck wishes, it won the contest. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from Sixty70
Nice one. Sweet story with an unexpected twist. Good job getting this into 100 words too. The best part? This has everything needed for the 3-Act structure. You've got my vote!!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Nice one. Sweet story with an unexpected twist. Good job getting this into 100 words too. The best part? This has everything needed for the 3-Act structure. You've got my vote!!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and support, I really appreciate it.
Also, welcome to the site. I hope you have a long and enjoyable stay my friend...
Comment from frogbook
A good little story ending with a little "punch". Many of the others were boring and flay but this one is lively and kept the reader wondering what she would say. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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A good little story ending with a little "punch". Many of the others were boring and flay but this one is lively and kept the reader wondering what she would say. Best of luck.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, I do appreciate it. Have a great day my friend.
Comment from l.raven
Hey you, this is too funny my friend...sounds like you might be....NO!!!!....LOL...I knew this would end funny...so glad I dropped by...I hate when I miss your contest poems...good luck...a great story told...LOL...I will check up on the voting...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Hey you, this is too funny my friend...sounds like you might be....NO!!!!....LOL...I knew this would end funny...so glad I dropped by...I hate when I miss your contest poems...good luck...a great story told...LOL...I will check up on the voting...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you Linda for your wonderful review, I always enjoy reading your reviews. I'm glad you liked it and I'm also glad that it made you smile. Take care of yourself....
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HI Bill, so good to see you my friend...I am falling back behind...but I always check on you first...your sooooooo welcome ...always Bill...you take care as well...love...xxoo