Act of Endurance
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Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written and exceptional.
It read Well and Flowed well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were both excellent and exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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This was well written and exceptional.
It read Well and Flowed well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were both excellent and exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Be surprised how many rips I got hungry claws. Big kitty. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Possummagic
Enjoyed your piece of work. It is a t difficult to follow in parts but I accept that you are exercising your poetic license. In the second line it should possibly be "their deeds guide......" not guides.PM
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Enjoyed your piece of work. It is a t difficult to follow in parts but I accept that you are exercising your poetic license. In the second line it should possibly be "their deeds guide......" not guides.PM
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Appreciate the shout, I will review this write. Glad some aspects were found appealing to your interests even though flaws. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from meeshu
unfortunately the battle rages on, the locations may change and the participants differ from time to time, but as your poem implies they don't end. well done, TPAC...................meeshu
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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unfortunately the battle rages on, the locations may change and the participants differ from time to time, but as your poem implies they don't end. well done, TPAC...................meeshu
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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I for some reason have a trust in your statement, not certain why. At least I can feel I found a path of potential from woods. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm heart.
Comment from kiwijenny
Officers defending others say right,
adults watching as instructors in might,
their deeds guides sheep to God's light.
Their deeds ...guide sheep to God's light.
Well penned poem. I like the thought
God bless
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Officers defending others say right,
adults watching as instructors in might,
their deeds guides sheep to God's light.
Their deeds ...guide sheep to God's light.
Well penned poem. I like the thought
God bless
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Glad aspects of this write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from write hand blue
A well presented poem with a picture of a strange mask.
I'm completely baffled, is there is any meaning to this?
You speak of Odin, is he your God?
I try to be interested in a believer of something that doesn't exist, but it's hard.
Please don't try to explain...
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016
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A well presented poem with a picture of a strange mask.
I'm completely baffled, is there is any meaning to this?
You speak of Odin, is he your God?
I try to be interested in a believer of something that doesn't exist, but it's hard.
Please don't try to explain...
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016
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Glad certain aspects caught your attention, God states many have given Him name: but few know His name. Thanking you for your honest, and generous rate: plus welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
this is such a beautiful write i was interested from the title great picture strong write i hope to be able to read more of your writing great job.
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016
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this is such a beautiful write i was interested from the title great picture strong write i hope to be able to read more of your writing great job.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016
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Glad these notes found delight for you. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed views.