Comment from Chuck23

Exceptional

I enjoyed reading! Perfect contest entry, as both read fully by themselves or joined together as one poem! I think this is a hard form to write, and you did it beautifully!

I also enjoyed the message between the two acrostics, and the flow!

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Thank you for the very generous six star rating! I appreciate your analysis of the form and the kind comments about the writing. Thank you for mentioning the flow. I am pleased you liked it.

Comment from Dr. Nad

Exceptional

You have created a masterpiece in your Acrostic - Fear No Evil. Your creative touch has taken a difficult assignment and delivered a wonderful work of art. I voted for you in this contest. Thanks for sharing. May God Bless YOU.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Hi Dr. Nad,
Thank you so much for the beautiful six star rating and the generous comments about the poem being a work of art. Thank you for the confidence in my work. I appreciate the blessings. God bless you as well. Thank you so much!
Debi

reply by Dr. Nad on 03-Mar-2016

You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Wow. This "cleave" poem surely set up a challenge that you've risen, grasped and wrote wonderfully. The message is clear and concise with those parameters.

Nicely done. John

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Hi John,
Thank you so much for the encouraging comments. I especially appreciate the comments about the message being clear and concise.
Debi

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Very impressive. Not only a cleave poem but an acrostic that rhymes with a powerful message. Excellent picture choice to compliment your work. I enjoyed reading this very creative piece.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Hi Janet,
I am pleased that you enjoyed reading this poem and appreciate your analysis of the form. God bless.
Debi

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Debi

= Whoa. This is excellent.
= This took some brain cell power!
= Enjoyable ... inspirational read.
= You should be very proud of this, my friend.
= Great job. Good luck in the contest with this super entry.

* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Hi Jax,
Thank you for the excellent review. I am happy you found it enjoyable to read. Thank you for the good luck wishes.
Debi

Comment from AnnaLinda

Exceptional

Debi,

Oh my! This is a brilliant poem and then to think
that you made your cleave entry a double acrostic
is just mind boggling...then add to that your
spiritual and uplifting message along with perfect
rhyme and flow...six million stars all day long!

Linda

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Hi Linda,
I appreciate the six million star review! You are so kind and generous. I am pleased you liked it. Thank YOU!
Debi

Comment from CDyer

Excellent

This is so great! I have never even heard of a cleave poem until the contest, and was too intimidated to try. You make it look easy! I really love your subject matter and message. The artwork was a perfect fit. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Thank you for the excellent review. I only recently heard of a cleave poem and had to give it a try. Thank you for the kind comments, especially that you thought I made it look easy. LOL. I love the artwork, too. Angelheart does such beautiful work. Thank you for the good luck wishes.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Congratulations, this is the first cleave acrostic that I have ever reviewed and you make it look easy, although I know you must have put a lot of time in on this excellent work.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Thank you for the kind review and congratulation on the work. It is so nice of you to say I made it look easy. You're correct, it wasn't, but I'll try any form once.

Comment from Kaydoe

Exceptional

Absolutely beautiful. I've never seen a poem written like that before. I've seen Acrostic poems but never a cleave and it is so neat. You delivered the topic well and I am sure God is smiling !

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Thank you for the wonderful six star rating. You say such nice things. I am pleased you liked it.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

You make this look so easy. I can tell the Holy Spirit guided this write. If I am lifted up. You have done this very well. Best to you in the contest. I hope you win.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016

Hi Ben,
Thank you so much for the six star rating! I am so pleased you found the Holy Spirit within this one. I appreciate the kind words about the writing and the wishes about winning, too. You leave me smiling. Thank you!