senryu(I woke this morning)
senryu contest entry27 total reviews
Comment from MacMhuirich
Being a Scot I'm not all that up in American politics, so I'm going to be political in this and say I enjoy the form of the senryu and it looks spot on. Best wishes for the contest my friend and I pray that others who are up in politics give you the reviews your words merit. I'm going to make a political retreat now.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Being a Scot I'm not all that up in American politics, so I'm going to be political in this and say I enjoy the form of the senryu and it looks spot on. Best wishes for the contest my friend and I pray that others who are up in politics give you the reviews your words merit. I'm going to make a political retreat now.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you John for the awesome review. Politics here are quite the mess lol!
God bless!
Comment from Glasstruth
I think this poem needs more words to get its message across. I understand it's a writing prompt. In that sense you did just fine. Read your author nores and there's quite a lot to follow. Well crafted. Les
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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I think this poem needs more words to get its message across. I understand it's a writing prompt. In that sense you did just fine. Read your author nores and there's quite a lot to follow. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you Les for the awesome review my friend. If I had more words, the rant would have been quite lengthy lol!
God bless!
Comment from mvbrooks
This can be read two ways...that Hillary arrived amid the propaganda, or that Hillary arrived to stop the propaganda. It would be naive to think that any of the leading politicians are not artists of propaganda.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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This can be read two ways...that Hillary arrived amid the propaganda, or that Hillary arrived to stop the propaganda. It would be naive to think that any of the leading politicians are not artists of propaganda.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Quite true MVbrooks, no one is immune to the propaganda in politics.
Thank you for the excellent review.
God bless!
Comment from LanceHill
Great job. You have described not only Hillary but so many more politicians as well. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Great job. You have described not only Hillary but so many more politicians as well. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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So very true Lance, Politicians are all nasty folk it seems.
God bless!
Comment from humpwhistle
Hmmmm, propaganda takes many forms.
And during the democratic election process,
propaganda is not only tolerated, but encouraged.
Every political campaign is a propaganda machine.
You may love your candidate, but don't believe everything he/she says.
It's easy to point fingers.
By the way, I'm no fan of Hilary Clinton.
I just like fair play.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Hmmmm, propaganda takes many forms.
And during the democratic election process,
propaganda is not only tolerated, but encouraged.
Every political campaign is a propaganda machine.
You may love your candidate, but don't believe everything he/she says.
It's easy to point fingers.
By the way, I'm no fan of Hilary Clinton.
I just like fair play.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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LOL! I can understand your reassurance as she doesn't have the best of reputations. I agree on the fair play part! Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A nice entry into the contest as you take your few words and express your views on Hillary Clinton and her message, or lack thereof. Great job, and without a picture, that makes it even harder. Good luck,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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A nice entry into the contest as you take your few words and express your views on Hillary Clinton and her message, or lack thereof. Great job, and without a picture, that makes it even harder. Good luck,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Thank you davisr for this most excellent review my friend. I had a little fun with this one lol!
God bless!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job with the prompt. You are so right. She is a propagandist. I call her Hillbilly.
She is a liar and murderer, too.
She does not speak for me as she once said she speaks for all women.
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Good job with the prompt. You are so right. She is a propagandist. I call her Hillbilly.
She is a liar and murderer, too.
She does not speak for me as she once said she speaks for all women.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Thank you for his awesome review my friend. I agree, total lack of integrity with this one. Black heart as well!
God bless!