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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Through the Valley of the Shadow"poems inspired by Psalm 23
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Comment from Nosha17
Lovely message, the Atonement of Christ did indeed pave the way for redemption if we believe in Him. Good use of rhyming and a great spiritual message to learn from. faye
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Lovely message, the Atonement of Christ did indeed pave the way for redemption if we believe in Him. Good use of rhyming and a great spiritual message to learn from. faye
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hi Faye,
Thank you for the excellent analysis and encouragement. I appreciate your insights on the theme.
Debi
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Debi
_ This is a beautiful peace in spirit of Him and the message so very true.
_ Awesome artwork with this too, as well as formatting.
_ Can't pick out a favorite part--it is just a lovely work.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hi, Debi
_ This is a beautiful peace in spirit of Him and the message so very true.
_ Awesome artwork with this too, as well as formatting.
_ Can't pick out a favorite part--it is just a lovely work.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful six stars, Jax! I am pleased you liked it that much. The encouragement it appreciate.
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You are very welcome.
Well deserved. (*>*)
Comment from Dom G Robles
I like the theme of this poem. Relying on the faith with Jesus. You can't go wrong and you will always be on the right path when you follow the teachings of Jesus Christ. I enjoyed reading the poem from beginning to end.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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I like the theme of this poem. Relying on the faith with Jesus. You can't go wrong and you will always be on the right path when you follow the teachings of Jesus Christ. I enjoyed reading the poem from beginning to end.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the gracious review. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the theme too.
Comment from hugje96
A well written peom praising the Lord and his everlasting compassion and the hope and knowledge that he will be there for you in your darkest hour. When you "think all hpoe is lost", Christ will be at your side. A poem full of promise of light at the end of the tunnel and of not having to face the world alone. Well done great write
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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A well written peom praising the Lord and his everlasting compassion and the hope and knowledge that he will be there for you in your darkest hour. When you "think all hpoe is lost", Christ will be at your side. A poem full of promise of light at the end of the tunnel and of not having to face the world alone. Well done great write
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate your comments about the theme. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Glasstruth
A great poem for Christians. There's so many religions, and they all seem to have the answer. I know they all believe in the same God. The Muslims and Christians in the Middle East seem to disprove that. The Hindus have several Gods, and Buddhism is another story. This really made me think. Les
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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A great poem for Christians. There's so many religions, and they all seem to have the answer. I know they all believe in the same God. The Muslims and Christians in the Middle East seem to disprove that. The Hindus have several Gods, and Buddhism is another story. This really made me think. Les
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hi Les,
Thank you for the thoughts to ponder. Yes, there are a lot of religions out there. I do like your thought that they all believe in the same God. If only everyone acted like it. There are too many wars in history that were fought in the name of religions that teach we should all respect and love one another.
There is no better compliment than your closing line--that it made you think. Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation. The artwork is special and awesome at the same time. The background with the white font add to the specialness of the words. Nice use of rhyme to add to the flow and enjoyment.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing an uplifting poem of faith.
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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This is a great presentation. The artwork is special and awesome at the same time. The background with the white font add to the specialness of the words. Nice use of rhyme to add to the flow and enjoyment.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing an uplifting poem of faith.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the review with such encouraging comments. I appreciate the analysis of the poem and its presentation. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Comment from mvbrooks
What a beautiful poem. It's light enough to be accepted and not heavy-handed into preaching. It takes a well-known bible verse and uses it as an inspiration to consider Christ's strength and to turn to him when our own strength seems low. Enjoyable, uplifting read.
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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What a beautiful poem. It's light enough to be accepted and not heavy-handed into preaching. It takes a well-known bible verse and uses it as an inspiration to consider Christ's strength and to turn to him when our own strength seems low. Enjoyable, uplifting read.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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I love this review. Thank you so much, especially for the second sentence. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi