A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Anonymity"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from Darkhorse555
quite the rant dean smiling dear friend love the part were you penned ill drink in your dying breath very powerful image excellent piece as always pal
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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quite the rant dean smiling dear friend love the part were you penned ill drink in your dying breath very powerful image excellent piece as always pal
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thank you very much, Liam. So sorry about the lengthy delay in responding. As always, I really appreciate your comments and review. :)
~Dean
Comment from Andrewajgblue
Wow, this is what you call a rant, remind never to get on your bad side, it reminded me of a gory horror film, truly scary stuff, great rhyming throughout, I liked the fact that it was called anonymity, when you posess the most distinctive style of writing, it's now a guessing game of who it is aimed at ?? Great writing,
Andreww
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Wow, this is what you call a rant, remind never to get on your bad side, it reminded me of a gory horror film, truly scary stuff, great rhyming throughout, I liked the fact that it was called anonymity, when you posess the most distinctive style of writing, it's now a guessing game of who it is aimed at ?? Great writing,
Andreww
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
Comment from JPilcher
OH-MY-GOD. LLLLLLLOOOOVVVVEEEE IT!!!
I feel weird though 'cause, I'm kind of excited, yet freaked (lmao! don't take that wrong.. or do!! I don't even know how to take it actually!! LMAO!!!)!!! :O
Bring it, c'mon over to my window - any window - take your pick. We'll see who gets taken out like a worm, alright. I've had a plan (or plans!) for an intruder since I was like, well, 5-6 maybe so............. Just waiting to try one of them out. ;)
Still waiting to see
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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OH-MY-GOD. LLLLLLLOOOOVVVVEEEE IT!!!
I feel weird though 'cause, I'm kind of excited, yet freaked (lmao! don't take that wrong.. or do!! I don't even know how to take it actually!! LMAO!!!)!!! :O
Bring it, c'mon over to my window - any window - take your pick. We'll see who gets taken out like a worm, alright. I've had a plan (or plans!) for an intruder since I was like, well, 5-6 maybe so............. Just waiting to try one of them out. ;)
Still waiting to see
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thank you, Jill, you're very kind, and I apologize for the lengthy delay in responding. I've been a bit under the weather lately. Your exceptional rating and excellent feedback are so very much appreciated, my friend! ~Dean
Comment from krys123
Dean; What a gifted God is going on? Do something around between two people that I know, one is a real prose writer and then there's you. I read his poetry mentioning you in a very negative way and now I read your poetry under the act of retaliation. A very familiar who the both of you are because I read both of your poems. This is acting like it's getting out of hand and it's more like reading the tabloids. One is to stand back and become an adult and just forget it.
On a technical note, the rhyming is done very well and neither stressed nor strained and very helpful in your rhythmic flow. The rhythm's meter, tempo, cadence and timing all are very helpful in making the reading clear, smooth, easy and fluid. Thank you for sharing your opinions and your ranting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
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Dean; What a gifted God is going on? Do something around between two people that I know, one is a real prose writer and then there's you. I read his poetry mentioning you in a very negative way and now I read your poetry under the act of retaliation. A very familiar who the both of you are because I read both of your poems. This is acting like it's getting out of hand and it's more like reading the tabloids. One is to stand back and become an adult and just forget it.
On a technical note, the rhyming is done very well and neither stressed nor strained and very helpful in your rhythmic flow. The rhythm's meter, tempo, cadence and timing all are very helpful in making the reading clear, smooth, easy and fluid. Thank you for sharing your opinions and your ranting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This sounds like a horror film. Not something I'd watch but there are people who would. Ever thought of doing/writing/anything with a horror film? Great job friend and I didn't see anything needing changing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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This sounds like a horror film. Not something I'd watch but there are people who would. Ever thought of doing/writing/anything with a horror film? Great job friend and I didn't see anything needing changing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment on this work, EL. I sincerely appreciate it.
I'm working on a horror screenplay for a producer in South Africa as we speak. It will be my first ever screenplay, and he found me through FanStory. It's about a prehistoric race of sharks which predate the Meglalodon which are unearthed from the depths of the Mariana Trench by a massive earthquake. You can imagine what happens from there. JAWS, eat your heart out! Heh-heh...
~Dean
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Oh my! I wish you nothing but the best. Not my thing but I hope you very successful. It's very cool that you're doing this.
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Thank you! :)
Comment from LIJ Red
Dang. Another post of the pist. You have a problem with anonymity, your style
is the most obvious on the site. If a bit of temper brings out rollicking rhymes
like these, you have a muse that works good and mad. This too shall pass.
I think I'll practice my walking on eggs now...
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Dang. Another post of the pist. You have a problem with anonymity, your style
is the most obvious on the site. If a bit of temper brings out rollicking rhymes
like these, you have a muse that works good and mad. This too shall pass.
I think I'll practice my walking on eggs now...
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from JM
WOW. I know I'm not he or she whose name remains unknown. I liked your rhyming rant but I hope I never get on your bad side. The pen IS mightier than the sword. I'm sure you didn't misss your intended target. This is freaking great.
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WOW. I know I'm not he or she whose name remains unknown. I liked your rhyming rant but I hope I never get on your bad side. The pen IS mightier than the sword. I'm sure you didn't misss your intended target. This is freaking great.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Gloria ....
Ah, ha! So now the anonymous has become the Anonymous. It's party time and the feast is none other than anonymous flesh.
Well you know what they say. You don't? To tell you the truth I don't either, but I think it's something like an eye for an eye.
Nicely composed maestro of the macabre. I know the miserable fecker deserved it too, because you never bring a monster to a leprechaun fight.
Love it!
Gloria
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Ah, ha! So now the anonymous has become the Anonymous. It's party time and the feast is none other than anonymous flesh.
Well you know what they say. You don't? To tell you the truth I don't either, but I think it's something like an eye for an eye.
Nicely composed maestro of the macabre. I know the miserable fecker deserved it too, because you never bring a monster to a leprechaun fight.
Love it!
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Cookie333
Well, so much for 'anonymity'. Someone or some thing is in for a thrashing I suspect. Watch out!
A smooth flowing piece, boy-I wouldn't want you ticked off at me...
thanks Dean
karen
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Well, so much for 'anonymity'. Someone or some thing is in for a thrashing I suspect. Watch out!
A smooth flowing piece, boy-I wouldn't want you ticked off at me...
thanks Dean
karen
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from mrsmajor
Dean,
One thing for sure, after reading your poem I am never going to cross you..LOL...Glad I'm not your Anonymous friend.
I must say your way of putting pen to paper, is what makes us want to read more and more of your work...You are excellent at what you do, and the rhyming and incidental internal rhymes, makes for a scary read...but an effective read...6 stars from me...
(I wasn't really scared).
Thanks for sharing this well written rhymed quatrain versed poem with us...
Hugs,
Victoria
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Dean,
One thing for sure, after reading your poem I am never going to cross you..LOL...Glad I'm not your Anonymous friend.
I must say your way of putting pen to paper, is what makes us want to read more and more of your work...You are excellent at what you do, and the rhyming and incidental internal rhymes, makes for a scary read...but an effective read...6 stars from me...
(I wasn't really scared).
Thanks for sharing this well written rhymed quatrain versed poem with us...
Hugs,
Victoria
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015