Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

TEAM WORK IS WHAT IT TAKES TO STAY ON TOP OF THE BATTLE AND NOT DWELL ON WHAT ONE CAN'T CHANGE THEY ARE JUST GLAD THEY HAVE SO FAR BEEN ONE STEP AHEAD OF THE ENEMY

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

Ah, thank you so much for the six star and for the evidence of a deeper reading of the text. I appreciate you so much. Are you in the witness protection, or do you have a given name I can call you by? It always seems so precious to say, "...my friend."

reply by country ranch writer on 26-Oct-2014

JUST CALL ME BJ

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

Gotcha! But I just realized I asked you again as a result of your PM.

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Been sitting here trying to figure out a tune for your song. Did you have a tune in mind? This was a great chapter. They are all pretty good. You managed to keep my interest so I guess most of us reading would feel the same.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

No, Geoff, I'm the lyricist of the partnership, just waiting for the partner to come along who can carry a tune. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. About 5 away from one that'll knock you off your seat.

reply by Sankey on 26-Oct-2014

OK well I have penned down a bit of a tune. Will have a go at getting it on the Encore programme just a one liner ok. I mean just the melody for a verse and chorus. may take a while to get it down.

reply by Sankey on 26-Oct-2014

I forget if I have an e-mail for you have done the tune for the verse just working on the chorus bit. Write me at my e-mail if you have it or PM me your e-mail addy

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

Unless you're gonna have someone sing it on youtube it won't do a whole lotta good. I can't read music!

reply by Sankey on 26-Oct-2014

It will be a Mid file or maybe even converted to MP3 in PIano

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

Ah, another beautiful chapter, including a chant for the troops to sing. The storyline is fine. The dialog is fantastic. It is interesting and holds my attention very well. I enjoyed reading this chapter just as much as the others I've read. And, I look forward to the next.

Always with respect,

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

Thank you, my friend. It does my heart good to have people getting enjoyment from my writing. By the way... is Eigle your given name? Just asking.

reply by Eigle Rull on 26-Oct-2014

My real name is Elgie, which is Eigle spelled backwards. Elgie is pronounced L.G. My last name is Bacon, as in eggs. Ha! On the site I use Rull as a last name. It is my father's middle name.

Always with respect,

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

I can call you L.G. or Elgie or Eigle, but I'll never call you late for dinner, HO-HO! Which do you prefer?

reply by Eigle Rull on 26-Oct-2014

I guess my real name is my favorite: Elgie

Always with respect,

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Another magnificent piece you have crafted well. I have become intrigued with you style of writing and find myself wanting to read more. God Bless!

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

Well, God Bless you as well, Neonewman. I'm glad you enjoyed it. More than that, I'm glad you jumped aboard for the long haul.