THE TRINING Book Three
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Comment from kiwijenny
Well done...the way Doctrex handled this situation to allay fear....
I lke the psychological understanding....wise for the enemy to get inside their heads,,,,defeat before any bullet is fired
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Well done...the way Doctrex handled this situation to allay fear....
I lke the psychological understanding....wise for the enemy to get inside their heads,,,,defeat before any bullet is fired
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Jenny. Yes, it seems to be a grapple between Doctrex and Rhuether right up to their face-to-face contact. Hope you're right there with them.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey, Jay,
Hot Damn! I knew it! Glnot is playing with their minds. BUT, to what extent will he go? This is not going to be pretty. No, sir.
He just better leave my Doctrex alone. (*.*) Just sayin'
Good chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Hey, Jay,
Hot Damn! I knew it! Glnot is playing with their minds. BUT, to what extent will he go? This is not going to be pretty. No, sir.
He just better leave my Doctrex alone. (*.*) Just sayin'
Good chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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THanks, Jax. Glad you found it entertaining. But, more importantly, did it pay off? I'm down to 18 cents and 2 pumps, so I'll be reading like crazy until Saturday evening's post. See ya' round the bend.
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No you gave me nothing.... -0- ... Nada, but I still like you. (*.*)
Comment from Sankey
Well done friend, again. We are all subject to psychological warfare at times. Not sure where your beliefs are but there is more truth in your writing than you possibly realize. We are all battling against the world, the flesh (our own desires and wants) and the evil one satan himself. So while your story is fiction there is a lot of truth in there in real life. God Bless.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Well done friend, again. We are all subject to psychological warfare at times. Not sure where your beliefs are but there is more truth in your writing than you possibly realize. We are all battling against the world, the flesh (our own desires and wants) and the evil one satan himself. So while your story is fiction there is a lot of truth in there in real life. God Bless.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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God bless you as well, Geoff. Yes, I try to tie my Fantasy to the belief systems of all denominations. All are based on faith and the knowledge that we are all moved by the unknown.
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Great response one thing to add though we can KNOW HIM personally that leads my friend. Some denominations teach that God is off some where and not able to be approached by mere man. Some chruches don't want the rank and file to read the scxriptures for themselves and claim that only the priest is able to interpret scripture. I am glad that is NOT SO. Ok off my sdoap box. Really enjoying your story. It would seem the 'enemy' Glnot Reuther is not really any more powerful than what his underlings or those that seek to conquer him allow him to be what!
Comment from royowen
Exciting episode Jay, Glnot Reuther still up to his old tricks, trying to work through the minds and keep them off guard, trying to kill moral to such a degree, that it will change the dynamics of their ability to fight, the best way to undermine an army is to sow doubt in their mind, well done, interesting to see how Doctrex will overcome the mind attacks, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Exciting episode Jay, Glnot Reuther still up to his old tricks, trying to work through the minds and keep them off guard, trying to kill moral to such a degree, that it will change the dynamics of their ability to fight, the best way to undermine an army is to sow doubt in their mind, well done, interesting to see how Doctrex will overcome the mind attacks, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Blessings to you, Roy. Rhuether and Doctrex will be grappling throughout, even before they meet face to face. Glad to have you along while it all transpires.
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Welcome, Jay, you're a good writer, it's good to be entertained and be rewarded, Roy.
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Ah-ha! so you got a member pump?
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I did, how did you know?
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" it's good to be entertained and be rewarded, Roy." LOL, Rock on!
Comment from Eric1
Hi Jay, this is my first visit to this wonderful story my friend, thank you for the ending of the previous characters, I have to get used to the many characters, which, may I say, are very well drawn, I now have the gist of the story and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Hi Jay, this is my first visit to this wonderful story my friend, thank you for the ending of the previous characters, I have to get used to the many characters, which, may I say, are very well drawn, I now have the gist of the story and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Eric. Love to have you aboard. There are some good fantasy chapters ahead. To get the gist of what's happening you should read the previous two chapters, which still have over a buck's worth on each (and maybe more!)
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You are welcome Jay, I think I will go back and read through all 3 chapters again my friend.
Comment from Neonewman
One will die for every three men that fall, powerful. This story continues to captivate me intently. I will be waiting for the next entry. God Bless!
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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One will die for every three men that fall, powerful. This story continues to captivate me intently. I will be waiting for the next entry. God Bless!
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thanks Neonewman. So that's an attention catcher, huh? I'm sure happy to have you on the scene.
