Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

So you say that's a trinet. Well, well, I do declare.
It counts out like you say. It has message. It's spelled right. looks like it's what you meant it to be. Five stars.

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

Thanks for the review LIJ Red. I appreciate the feedback.

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

w.j.debi: mechanically correct Trinet - yes, I actually counted all the words! Most impressive, though, are your words, beautifully crafted for a powerful poem. Thanks for sharing this with us. livelylinda

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

I count syllables and words when I review too. Thank you for such an encouraging review, livelylinda. It is so good to hear you enjoyed it.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A beautiful reproduction of Christ's heart wrenching plea to the Father in the garden of Gethsemane to remove the cup of suffering from Himself, and sweating drops of blood in the process! But Jesus was always willing to do His Father's will, praise His name! I found this to be well written and a wonderful tribute to The Lord of glory! Well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

Thank you for such an encouraging review and insightful comments, Roy. I am please you enjoyed it. God bless. Debi

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Such a shame that you missed the contest. This is very good and like you it is a new form to me. A perfect trinet and your words are lovely - would also have made a good faith poem contest entry. Very good. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

Thank you for a very encouraging review, Dorothy. I enter a contest now and again, but they are not my main reason for writing. I do like to check new forms when I find them though and I found the trinet intriguing. Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate it. Debi

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

A really beautiful use of the form. The presentation is gorgeous and highlights the perfect flow and meaning of your piece and makes it a perfect pause in a busy day for reflection. I liked this quite a bit. Well done. mikey

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you for such a positive and encouraging review, Mikey. I am so pleased that you liked it. Debi

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Effective poem with a strong spiritual message and attractive layout. You have made good use of language and imagery. Enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you for this great review, Faye. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a beautiful trinet! it tells you how to live and prosper. may god be with you, now and forever!
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you, Rebekka. I appreciate the encouraging review. Debi

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Debi - a very strong spiritual work, great word choices to bring your faith into focus for me. I enjoyed reading it, I never heard of a trinet, before,but I do like the format.

Well done,
Mary

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you for a great review, Mary. I am so happy you enjoyed reading it. It was a new form for me and I had fun trying it out. Debi

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Trinet is an interesting format that I haven't seen before. I will have to add this poem to my library so I will be able to produce one myself at a future date. The picture is marvellous.

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you for the encouraging review, Alan. The great thing about this site is being introduced to so many new forms of writing. The Trinet was new to me a couple of weeks ago as well. Have fun when you do yours. Debi

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

I could really feel your passion behind this poem. It seems to me the Trinet is fairly easy to write because it's based on number of words, not syllables. Well done. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you for the great review, Lou. Looks can be deceiving. I thought the same as you, that word count would make it easier. Maybe I've been counting syllables too long because the word count ended up being my greatest challenge with this form. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi