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Comment from darla1977
The third verse threw this one off a little, but I loved your opening and closing lines! I know those jelly jars with flowers on the table, they were on my mother's table too! Took me back to my childhood for a second! Good job on this!
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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The third verse threw this one off a little, but I loved your opening and closing lines! I know those jelly jars with flowers on the table, they were on my mother's table too! Took me back to my childhood for a second! Good job on this!
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much...I wanted to add the third verse because my daughter used to hold the flowers under my chin, lol...have a great week