All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Ode to Me!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think we all need to write ourselves a little poem or song for ourselves because we all have those days when we just need a pick me up. This is your pick me up. Great job
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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I think we all need to write ourselves a little poem or song for ourselves because we all have those days when we just need a pick me up. This is your pick me up. Great job
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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yep - some days, you need it, others, you feel it! :)S
Comment from charlyann
Very nice ...I enjoyed this poem...uplifting and lovely, the structure and flow were good...and the message is wonderful we all should celebrate ourselves...always
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Very nice ...I enjoyed this poem...uplifting and lovely, the structure and flow were good...and the message is wonderful we all should celebrate ourselves...always
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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absolutely we should charlyann! :)Sharyn
Comment from Aussie
Brilliant thoughts, why not write an ode to thyself? A cheeky, happy, fun-filled poem (we need more laughter.) I liked the suttle descriptions like 'but have yellow, innocent eyes' - freedom is a woman that can love what she does and does what she loves. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Brilliant thoughts, why not write an ode to thyself? A cheeky, happy, fun-filled poem (we need more laughter.) I liked the suttle descriptions like 'but have yellow, innocent eyes' - freedom is a woman that can love what she does and does what she loves. Well done poet.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Bless you, fellow Aussie, for enjoying my poem, for recognizing its cheekiness AND for that lovely SIX! YEAH! THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)Sharyn
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OH, happy days it is raining here in Queensland - I wrote a poem called Mother Earth how we long for some respite from the heat and destructive fires - where are you? Kay.
Comment from Titanx9
Yeah! You're hot stuff - lol. I love this. What a total and unfettered freedom you show in this free-flowing piece. Keep on smiling and looking up and embracing all life has to offer and you'll probably be around until you're one hundred. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Yeah! You're hot stuff - lol. I love this. What a total and unfettered freedom you show in this free-flowing piece. Keep on smiling and looking up and embracing all life has to offer and you'll probably be around until you're one hundred. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Blessings, my dear! thank you so much - I like that thought! :)Sharyn
Comment from Deborah Marie
Thanks for sharing this ode to me poem for the contest you entered. Good luck. I like the set up, progression, rhythm and flow for a good read, Deb
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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Thanks for sharing this ode to me poem for the contest you entered. Good luck. I like the set up, progression, rhythm and flow for a good read, Deb
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2013
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thx so much Deb! :)Sharyn
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Yeah! You go girl! HAHAHA! This is so much fun, Sharyn. There is so much enthusiasm in this, my god, I was grinning the whole way through. You put yourself in tune with EVERYTHING it seems! Wonderful read - all those little details. Love the reference to the old Walmart watch, and 'gold-buttered' afternoon is just yummy!
This was such a pleasure to read after at tough day at work. Thanks!
Av
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Yeah! You go girl! HAHAHA! This is so much fun, Sharyn. There is so much enthusiasm in this, my god, I was grinning the whole way through. You put yourself in tune with EVERYTHING it seems! Wonderful read - all those little details. Love the reference to the old Walmart watch, and 'gold-buttered' afternoon is just yummy!
This was such a pleasure to read after at tough day at work. Thanks!
Av
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Bless you for enjoying, Av! :)S
Comment from Kelly Shackelford
Love this poem 1000X times over:> What a great ode to be free to be yourself and to love every quirky think that goes with it. Bravo girlfriend! :>
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Love this poem 1000X times over:> What a great ode to be free to be yourself and to love every quirky think that goes with it. Bravo girlfriend! :>
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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I had fun with this one, Kelly - and I'm DELIGHTED that you shared the fun. Bless you for your magic six!
:)Sharyn
Comment from Anisa-
Hah, this was a lot of fun to read. Everyone needs to spend a moment celebrating themselves every once in a while. Sounds like you have a lot of fun in life. Not sure I've ever liked banana bread, but I have done some strange things like smell books...Lol.
The whole poem has a very cheery feeling to it, and just as you say in your notes, I can really tell that you saw and felt everything you wrote about.
Well done.
A
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Hah, this was a lot of fun to read. Everyone needs to spend a moment celebrating themselves every once in a while. Sounds like you have a lot of fun in life. Not sure I've ever liked banana bread, but I have done some strange things like smell books...Lol.
The whole poem has a very cheery feeling to it, and just as you say in your notes, I can really tell that you saw and felt everything you wrote about.
Well done.
A
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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thx so much Anisa - you need to taste GOOD banana bread!! :)Sharyn
Comment from Chanphy
The mood, the tone, and the voice of this poem go well together. Excitement is in the air, and that comes through not only by the structure of your poem but also by your very poignant, beautiful that you penned.
Brilliant.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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The mood, the tone, and the voice of this poem go well together. Excitement is in the air, and that comes through not only by the structure of your poem but also by your very poignant, beautiful that you penned.
Brilliant.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much, Chanphy! :)Sharyn
Comment from fictionwriter
I would like to step into your shoes and feel those wonderful things. I'm freezing my fingers off, and wondering if my nose will stay on. LOL. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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I would like to step into your shoes and feel those wonderful things. I'm freezing my fingers off, and wondering if my nose will stay on. LOL. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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oh poor thing!! Well, today turned windy if that brings you comfort my dear! :))))) Sharyn