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Looking back

Youth and it's endless possibilities

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Comment from Gungalo
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I revisit the dawn
of uninhibited youth.
Teaming with hope,
full of excitement,
endless possibilities, truth.
To leave me wondering
where I will go.
Life and it's reward
still just out of reach.

I love this whole write GW and you should be very proud of it. Wonderful wording in this little free verse.

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
    Thank you for the compliment. I really appreciate the great rating and the kind words.
reply by Gungalo on 29-Dec-2012
    Smile.