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Comment from October21
Great formatting- like loads of separate little poems all within one piece. I haven't read many like this before and it is interesting to see appreciation and admiration in God's work:)
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Great formatting- like loads of separate little poems all within one piece. I haven't read many like this before and it is interesting to see appreciation and admiration in God's work:)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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I appreciate you great input
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading this piece, " The Creator's Mind". The presentation was interesting and diverse. I agree with your philosophy and appreciated the detail of your message. Very nicely done. Blessings.
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I enjoyed reading this piece, " The Creator's Mind". The presentation was interesting and diverse. I agree with your philosophy and appreciated the detail of your message. Very nicely done. Blessings.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much JMF
Comment from justatuna
This is a great poem. I'm sorry I have no 6 for you. Just the work and intelligence warrants nothing less. Enjoyed the message. Excellent flow. I didn't stumble a bit. That says something as I constantly stumble. Very well done. Exceptional and worthy of the recognition.
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This is a great poem. I'm sorry I have no 6 for you. Just the work and intelligence warrants nothing less. Enjoyed the message. Excellent flow. I didn't stumble a bit. That says something as I constantly stumble. Very well done. Exceptional and worthy of the recognition.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Your words bring joy to my heart. Thank you.
Comment from Charade
This is a wonderful yet not preachy approach to the truth. two thumbs up!
The nonet poems add a very nice touch.
Hence we should all get along because we are as diverse as the trees God's created--He likes diversity. Great illustration!
"celestial brew" I love that phrase.
I love it up until the end. I have to disagree that we are creators. Creating means to make something of nothing. I so cannot do that. But it flows, and I know what you're saying. What a wonderful testament to an Almighty God!
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This is a wonderful yet not preachy approach to the truth. two thumbs up!
The nonet poems add a very nice touch.
Hence we should all get along because we are as diverse as the trees God's created--He likes diversity. Great illustration!
"celestial brew" I love that phrase.
I love it up until the end. I have to disagree that we are creators. Creating means to make something of nothing. I so cannot do that. But it flows, and I know what you're saying. What a wonderful testament to an Almighty God!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Charade for your review and comments.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is probably the most impressive piece of writing I have read in years. It all makes such a lot of sense I can't fault any part of it. It has made me think about life, not only of human life but all life. To think that everything is individual, unique in its own right, just blows the mind. You have certainly given this a lot of thought, I wonder if anyone else has ever given your reasoning any thought before you. I most sincerely doubt it. Excellently written and really worth the read. Good luck in the contest, though I doubt you will need it! xsx Sandra.
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That is probably the most impressive piece of writing I have read in years. It all makes such a lot of sense I can't fault any part of it. It has made me think about life, not only of human life but all life. To think that everything is individual, unique in its own right, just blows the mind. You have certainly given this a lot of thought, I wonder if anyone else has ever given your reasoning any thought before you. I most sincerely doubt it. Excellently written and really worth the read. Good luck in the contest, though I doubt you will need it! xsx Sandra.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Such a wonderful review. I am humbled. Yes, these are my own original thoughts that I have had for years, but the first time I ever fully expressed them. The prompt just set me off. That's what I like about this site.
Comment from prayingpoet
Interesting poem...at first I started reading at the top of the poem, but then stopped reading and decided to read from the bottom up...wow, it was awesome to read backwards!Great flow, great words, thanks for sharing.
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Interesting poem...at first I started reading at the top of the poem, but then stopped reading and decided to read from the bottom up...wow, it was awesome to read backwards!Great flow, great words, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Hmm now that's a new way to look at it.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
I thoroughly enjoyed this poetic work. I hesitated to read it at first; because I thought it was going to claim we ourselves were gods, which I do not agree with, but found it to be describing us as in the image of God. We do like to create those things which are within our abilities. I especially liked this line: "God's creation is ALL unique". And, I do like the artwork!
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poetic work. I hesitated to read it at first; because I thought it was going to claim we ourselves were gods, which I do not agree with, but found it to be describing us as in the image of God. We do like to create those things which are within our abilities. I especially liked this line: "God's creation is ALL unique". And, I do like the artwork!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for this nice review. Glad you didn't get put off.
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You are very welcome. Enjoyed! MN :)
Comment from visionary1234
Excellent free-form write, Treischel!
a few minor comments:
"creation of instantly evolving thoughts
that simply evolved during the moment's time, as he started with simple things
and then" ... you've used 'evolving' and 'evolved' too close together here I think - lessens the dramatic impact?
I'm sure glad He got off that
"udder" kick
before he got around to humans. - you lost me here - what's the "udder" kick???
Now,
look around at mankind.
He created them in his image and likeness, and endowed them with abilities nothing else on earth has - ok ... you've used "mankind" as a reference, but then gone on to talk about "them" - so there's no singular/plural agreement happening - best to refer then to "us", yes?
but a truly excellent write nonetheless!
Best wishes
Sharyn
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Excellent free-form write, Treischel!
a few minor comments:
"creation of instantly evolving thoughts
that simply evolved during the moment's time, as he started with simple things
and then" ... you've used 'evolving' and 'evolved' too close together here I think - lessens the dramatic impact?
I'm sure glad He got off that
"udder" kick
before he got around to humans. - you lost me here - what's the "udder" kick???
Now,
look around at mankind.
He created them in his image and likeness, and endowed them with abilities nothing else on earth has - ok ... you've used "mankind" as a reference, but then gone on to talk about "them" - so there's no singular/plural agreement happening - best to refer then to "us", yes?
but a truly excellent write nonetheless!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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You make some very good points, thanks.
The Udder kick is that cows give milk between their legs from udders, while women have breasts. Which would you prefer?
I went and changed the them to us in that line, because are right.
I didn't change the two evolve statements because I was making a statement about Evolution and changing either to any other word loses too much of my point. But I gave it some thought.
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always welcome my dear! :) Sharyn
Comment from Angel Debbie
I like the way you think on this write it is done in the essence of our Lord God's way of thinking which I think is so great. And doing it in a nonet form is so cool at that. Thank You for sharing and you deserved all the credit given.
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I like the way you think on this write it is done in the essence of our Lord God's way of thinking which I think is so great. And doing it in a nonet form is so cool at that. Thank You for sharing and you deserved all the credit given.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you for this insightful review.
Comment from artemis53
beautifully done and I enjoy your in depth philosophy and the ability to laugh at oneself-"I think about the philosophical arguments we fools have" It is said "My name is on everything and I think of the composites of all DNA-A,C,T,G.
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beautifully done and I enjoy your in depth philosophy and the ability to laugh at oneself-"I think about the philosophical arguments we fools have" It is said "My name is on everything and I think of the composites of all DNA-A,C,T,G.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Tha k you Artemis