All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Soul's Voice"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from juliedickson55
Very visual in these lines:
"wave your hazy curtains
in the shimmers of the moonlight"
"infinite midnight blue,
our soul-stars streaking""sliding down the satin rainbow
back to the warm safety of your bed,"
A happy fairy tale of a child dreaming...
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Very visual in these lines:
"wave your hazy curtains
in the shimmers of the moonlight"
"infinite midnight blue,
our soul-stars streaking""sliding down the satin rainbow
back to the warm safety of your bed,"
A happy fairy tale of a child dreaming...
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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thx Julie!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A beautifully written poem. The story about your son is quite interesting as are poeple's reports of near-death experiences. Good luck in the contest!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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A beautifully written poem. The story about your son is quite interesting as are poeple's reports of near-death experiences. Good luck in the contest!!! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thx Debbie!
Comment from gazzagodbod
what a beautiful piece beautiful picture and presentation and your words are just wonderful thank you so much my friend gazza
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what a beautiful piece beautiful picture and presentation and your words are just wonderful thank you so much my friend gazza
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
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thx gazza!
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi the author,
Interesting theme for your poem, it touches on one of those sixty-four thousand dollar questions. Where do we come from and where do we go in the end.
Patrick
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Hi the author,
Interesting theme for your poem, it touches on one of those sixty-four thousand dollar questions. Where do we come from and where do we go in the end.
Patrick
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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where would the world be without mystery, hmm? thx Patrick!
Comment from Starlit Ink
The free flowing presentation of this is absolutely lovely to go with the beautiful thought of the poem. This is a good entry and will be a strong contender for the contest. The wording is imaginative and creative. Good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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The free flowing presentation of this is absolutely lovely to go with the beautiful thought of the poem. This is a good entry and will be a strong contender for the contest. The wording is imaginative and creative. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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thx Starlit!
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. I am left wonder who the "we" may be. It seemed as if they are angels bunt usually references to faeries exclude angels. None the less, good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
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This is an interesting piece. I am left wonder who the "we" may be. It seemed as if they are angels bunt usually references to faeries exclude angels. None the less, good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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aah, but I say "like" fairies, Mai Mai ...
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tou'che
Comment from stephybs
This is a beautiful poem that takes you on magical journey.It captures the imagination and flows as if it were in flight! Excellent Stuff! Stephanie:)
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This is a beautiful poem that takes you on magical journey.It captures the imagination and flows as if it were in flight! Excellent Stuff! Stephanie:)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Stephanie - and a HUGE thank you, too, for your lovely '6'!!! :)
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Poet,
You have written a lovely poem for the contest. The picture you chose is priceless and it reminds me of how innocent our little ones are. I have never had a out of the body experience but I believe your son did. You have used great words to tell this tale and I enjoyed every word. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Hi Poet,
You have written a lovely poem for the contest. The picture you chose is priceless and it reminds me of how innocent our little ones are. I have never had a out of the body experience but I believe your son did. You have used great words to tell this tale and I enjoyed every word. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
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Thx so much chey!
Comment from rightforyou
well done, I my it to the verse of leaving through the open window..
find myself doing that on occasion.....
course I relate that to my being deer to my mother,along with the fact that, I was cistercian born....
You can't really tell, except when leaving my house I trend to exit through the window.......
Cheers...Ron
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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well done, I my it to the verse of leaving through the open window..
find myself doing that on occasion.....
course I relate that to my being deer to my mother,along with the fact that, I was cistercian born....
You can't really tell, except when leaving my house I trend to exit through the window.......
Cheers...Ron
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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aaaah, so many mysteries! thx Ron!
Comment from sweetfeather
I love this piece, so tender and beautiful. We all wish we had parents who thought in poetry :) Such a beautiful and endearing poem, evoking images of innocence against moon of a friend. Special.
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I love this piece, so tender and beautiful. We all wish we had parents who thought in poetry :) Such a beautiful and endearing poem, evoking images of innocence against moon of a friend. Special.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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thank you so much sweets! :)