Just Daisy, Part 1
Inspired by 'through a child's eyes' prompt34 total reviews
Comment from jjstar
Awwwww....just adorable! Good for you from looking at it his point of view. I've never actually seen anyone do it before. On FS before, that is. It made me think of the movie Look Who's Talking. Very original and great job!
You know what she says next?
"It's probably just gas."
SOSOSOSOSO CUTE!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Awwwww....just adorable! Good for you from looking at it his point of view. I've never actually seen anyone do it before. On FS before, that is. It made me think of the movie Look Who's Talking. Very original and great job!
You know what she says next?
"It's probably just gas."
SOSOSOSOSO CUTE!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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jjstar, you are such an encouraging reviewer! I always try to step in a childs shoes, for do we ever forget how it was to be as a child.. again thank you so much!!!.. jlsavell
Comment from saychirah
This is so daisy...I mean lovely. Kids are so adorable. I wish you put this in for the contest because it got me laughing and I know others who will read it will feel the same.you are a good writer and every bit of the story is good.why don't you start a book with it?
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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This is so daisy...I mean lovely. Kids are so adorable. I wish you put this in for the contest because it got me laughing and I know others who will read it will feel the same.you are a good writer and every bit of the story is good.why don't you start a book with it?
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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saychirah, thank you for such a wonderful compliment. I have not ever considered myself a writer of any sorts, but to hear such sweet things makes me think, maybe I do have something going.. again thank oyu... jlsavell
Comment from visionary1234
Well it certainly sounds like got inside your son's head just fine! And I KNOW for a fact that they can bung it on just fine - my now 15 1/2 year old told me so! I like the child-reflections and sweet capturing of speech patterns. :)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Well it certainly sounds like got inside your son's head just fine! And I KNOW for a fact that they can bung it on just fine - my now 15 1/2 year old told me so! I like the child-reflections and sweet capturing of speech patterns. :)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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visionary1234, thank you ever so much for stopping in to read and review my work. I am thrilled you enjoyed this work... again thank you.. jlsavell
Comment from Aussie
'themomenator' hee, hee, great name Mommy. I grinned my way through this little story - you are a big kid. You have pulled out your memories and I look forward to more Weally I do. LOL. ****** six Texass virtual stars today.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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'themomenator' hee, hee, great name Mommy. I grinned my way through this little story - you are a big kid. You have pulled out your memories and I look forward to more Weally I do. LOL. ****** six Texass virtual stars today.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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And a big hug and thank you to you sweet sweet friend. I have so many stories of my children. jlsavell
Comment from Dave M
Jimi,
This is an excellent short story about the little tyke's schemes. I enjoyed reading this post and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Jimi,
This is an excellent short story about the little tyke's schemes. I enjoyed reading this post and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Dave, once again sweet friend thank you ever ever so much.. jimi
Comment from Gungalo
LOL that little one knew just how to get to you didn't he? LOL this is so funny girl. Especially this:
Mommy says she just doesn't know what she is going to do with me. We'll see. It's time to make her day just daisy.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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LOL that little one knew just how to get to you didn't he? LOL this is so funny girl. Especially this:
Mommy says she just doesn't know what she is going to do with me. We'll see. It's time to make her day just daisy.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Girl, thank you so much.. Yes, I have many a story from experience my friend, you cannot raise five children and not have a storehouse of stories to tell.. lol.. thank you sweet friend... jimi
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Smile Jimi.
Comment from J.Byers
An amusing little write, and a clever idea, to imagine what your son was thinking. Children have such interesting minds. I loved your use of 'just daisy', this was very effective in making your write childlike. Very well done.
Blessings,
~ J.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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An amusing little write, and a clever idea, to imagine what your son was thinking. Children have such interesting minds. I loved your use of 'just daisy', this was very effective in making your write childlike. Very well done.
Blessings,
~ J.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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JByers, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my fun piece. again thank you.. jlsavell
Comment from nomi338
This story is so, so funny. Imagine a child trying to use adult psychology on a grownup who understands psychology in ways no child could. So he plays and colors all day at play school and he thinks that this is an indicator of his not doing well. Too funny. This story is an absolute hoot and funny to boot.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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This story is so, so funny. Imagine a child trying to use adult psychology on a grownup who understands psychology in ways no child could. So he plays and colors all day at play school and he thinks that this is an indicator of his not doing well. Too funny. This story is an absolute hoot and funny to boot.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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nomi338, oh yes children are so much more perceptive than we give them credit for.. thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review. I am humbled... jlsavell
Comment from Cindy Warren
That brings back memories. My oldest daughter did that a lot. I had to tell her if she was too sick for school, she had to stay in bed. She was fine as soon as the bus had gone.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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That brings back memories. My oldest daughter did that a lot. I had to tell her if she was too sick for school, she had to stay in bed. She was fine as soon as the bus had gone.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Cindy Warren, thank you ever ever so much for stopping by to read and review this work. How well we can relate to childrens tactics.. lol... jlsavell
Comment from OldSalt
This is a great portrait of a kid trying to get his own way. Doesn't work with a shrewd mother who knows all the tricks. Sounds like he had a good day, maybe too boring for him. Liked the "just daisy" touch. Old Salt
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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This is a great portrait of a kid trying to get his own way. Doesn't work with a shrewd mother who knows all the tricks. Sounds like he had a good day, maybe too boring for him. Liked the "just daisy" touch. Old Salt
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Old Salt, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review this work. Children are definitely a great subject to write of... again thank you... jlsavell