Give A Gift Of Sweetness ... Aigner
Defined, decadent and delicious!61 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Thanks so much Lucas. A fun change of pace for me.
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You're welcome, G. Charlie
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Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Comment from animatqua
This was quite the advertisement! I have a lot of difficulty writing these kinds of pieces, so I really appreciate authors who can. I love contests, but I turned away from this one because I just don't have the kind of talent it needed.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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This was quite the advertisement! I have a lot of difficulty writing these kinds of pieces, so I really appreciate authors who can. I love contests, but I turned away from this one because I just don't have the kind of talent it needed.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Sure ya do, poet. You are very talented and could do this one blindfolded. Trust me. I do thank you for a great review of mine.
Comment from gramalot8
Gungalo, I am not necessarily a chocolate lover, but your rendition of of how good the Aigner's Chocolate is would make me change my mind. Very good description. Nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Gungalo, I am not necessarily a chocolate lover, but your rendition of of how good the Aigner's Chocolate is would make me change my mind. Very good description. Nice job.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Thanks Gramalot!!! This was a fun contest to do and made me step into a box of Aigner's Chocolates. LOL. MUAHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from RebelRose
Reading all these entries really has my mouth watering.
The description of this candy alone makes me want some chocolate. I am a die-hard chocoholic.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Reading all these entries really has my mouth watering.
The description of this candy alone makes me want some chocolate. I am a die-hard chocoholic.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Thanks so much RR for a delicious review. Dang, now ya got me wanting some too!!!!
Comment from bowls
Hmmmm... it's a good thing I have some chocolate treats left over from Halloween, otherwise I might have a severe case of chocolate withdrawal after reading your script. You certainly make this product sound appealing with words like decadent and tempting. In your first line you mention queens. Isn't that a place in New York? Shouldn't it have a capital letter? Also (and I'm not an American so I'm no expert) wouldn't it be a built up area and therefore not forested? Just wondering. Anyway, you've sold me on these chocolates. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Hmmmm... it's a good thing I have some chocolate treats left over from Halloween, otherwise I might have a severe case of chocolate withdrawal after reading your script. You certainly make this product sound appealing with words like decadent and tempting. In your first line you mention queens. Isn't that a place in New York? Shouldn't it have a capital letter? Also (and I'm not an American so I'm no expert) wouldn't it be a built up area and therefore not forested? Just wondering. Anyway, you've sold me on these chocolates. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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LOL "forested hills of queens" is a play on Forest Hills, Queens, NY. For the intro of the "royalty" feel. LOL, my thoughts at least and so no, not a capital and yes definitely forested. Thanks you. I think the company should send out boxes to everyone, little samplers ... ya know. What a beautifully written review. Thanks you.
Comment from ladybird
I think you ought to get in touch with these people and offer to become their advertising guru, you'd make a fortune, lol. This is good, it would make me go out and buy their chocolate.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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I think you ought to get in touch with these people and offer to become their advertising guru, you'd make a fortune, lol. This is good, it would make me go out and buy their chocolate.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Thanks so much Lady for your wonderful words. Mmmmmm makes me want some right now!! lOL.
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You're welcome.
Comment from CodyJack
Dang it girl! You now have my sweet buds watering for some good chocolate. You should be on commercials for you could sell this chocolate to me for sure LOL. Great imagery. Hugs to ya, Cody
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Dang it girl! You now have my sweet buds watering for some good chocolate. You should be on commercials for you could sell this chocolate to me for sure LOL. Great imagery. Hugs to ya, Cody
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Thanks Cody. Sweet sweet music from you.
Comment from Alf Garnett jnr.
Hi Gungalo. Many thanks for your lovely reviews on my poems. I am a bit puzzled, here. Your item is good, but, is
it not more of a short story, than a script? I'm not saying
it is bad, it is rather good. But, it seems to be more of a story. Just thought I'd mention it. Take care.
And, God bless you. From, Alf jnr.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Hi Gungalo. Many thanks for your lovely reviews on my poems. I am a bit puzzled, here. Your item is good, but, is
it not more of a short story, than a script? I'm not saying
it is bad, it is rather good. But, it seems to be more of a story. Just thought I'd mention it. Take care.
And, God bless you. From, Alf jnr.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Thanks Al, tried to change that but got this white page that wouldn't let me. Wonder if I can today.
Comment from Lastamen
Such a vivid contrast to your typical offerings of love and devotion. I was hoping to read about melted chocolate being dripped upon heaving bosoms - and blindfolded love fests with taste buds bursting from chocolate covered strawberries. Oh well . . . Nicely done any way. :)
Till the last amen
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Such a vivid contrast to your typical offerings of love and devotion. I was hoping to read about melted chocolate being dripped upon heaving bosoms - and blindfolded love fests with taste buds bursting from chocolate covered strawberries. Oh well . . . Nicely done any way. :)
Till the last amen
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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LOL not so shure the company would want to use that for their advertising campaign. Heheh cause if they would, don't forget the champagne, okay? Love it. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from rosah
ha ha..loved your author notes, and totally loved this entire write, i feel sure you have a winner!!!!!! i've personally never heard of Aigner, and i love chocolate, ....is this only a local brand??? thank you for sharing, blessings.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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ha ha..loved your author notes, and totally loved this entire write, i feel sure you have a winner!!!!!! i've personally never heard of Aigner, and i love chocolate, ....is this only a local brand??? thank you for sharing, blessings.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Thanks Rosah. No it's been around for a very long time and well known pretty much around the world I'd say. Your review is sooooo sweet, thanks you!!!
