Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Endless Night."memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from lola29
What an awful predicament to have been in all those many days. You've done an excellent job of projecting their sentiments. It was a very joyous occasion to see them brought to safety.
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What an awful predicament to have been in all those many days. You've done an excellent job of projecting their sentiments. It was a very joyous occasion to see them brought to safety.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2010
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thank you for the review
Comment from Triple P
Very nice tribute. Beautiful rhymes with a nice meter. Great imagery as well. I don't have any suggestions.
Good luck in the contest.
Patrick.
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Very nice tribute. Beautiful rhymes with a nice meter. Great imagery as well. I don't have any suggestions.
Good luck in the contest.
Patrick.
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thank you
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi poet. This is a beautiful, heart-warming piece of poetry about the plight of the Chilean miners. Your lovely words brought a tear to my eyes.
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Hi poet. This is a beautiful, heart-warming piece of poetry about the plight of the Chilean miners. Your lovely words brought a tear to my eyes.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2010
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thanks for the sentiment and the review
Comment from RADIO
The endless night and another
beautiful heart felt poem of
this time we had to watch with
moist eyes and a heavy heart as prayers
flew to heaven from earth.
Radio
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The endless night and another
beautiful heart felt poem of
this time we had to watch with
moist eyes and a heavy heart as prayers
flew to heaven from earth.
Radio
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thank you
Comment from markk
Beautiful poem about such a disastrous situation. thank goodness they are now freeing them. I enjoyed your poem so well. What a good tribute.
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Beautiful poem about such a disastrous situation. thank goodness they are now freeing them. I enjoyed your poem so well. What a good tribute.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2010
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thank you
Comment from zydecosal
Your poem is excellent. The rhyme and meter is good also and so is the picture. Thank God they are getting the men out. It is a miracle of gigantic proportians. Thanks for your poetic dedication. You might want to send a copy of it to the Chilian president. Great, great job.
Sally
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Your poem is excellent. The rhyme and meter is good also and so is the picture. Thank God they are getting the men out. It is a miracle of gigantic proportians. Thanks for your poetic dedication. You might want to send a copy of it to the Chilian president. Great, great job.
Sally
Comment Written 14-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2010
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thanks you got his web adress?
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I couldn't find it, but I looked. Sorry. What a miracle that all the men were rescued.
Sally
Comment from Magics02
Just wonderful here as I watched the first miner come out I sat here in tears of joy and wrote a little piece of reflection I had after I seen it. This is wonderful and yes I am so happy to see all of this unfold on tv. Many blessings to the miners and the rescuers. God is with them all. There is one word here in your third line (frantically) just have to add another l in there. You did a great job and the picture is spot on also:) magics Still so fantastic as we celebrate this occasion all over the world tonite:) Just perfect here now poet:)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2010
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Just wonderful here as I watched the first miner come out I sat here in tears of joy and wrote a little piece of reflection I had after I seen it. This is wonderful and yes I am so happy to see all of this unfold on tv. Many blessings to the miners and the rescuers. God is with them all. There is one word here in your third line (frantically) just have to add another l in there. You did a great job and the picture is spot on also:) magics Still so fantastic as we celebrate this occasion all over the world tonite:) Just perfect here now poet:)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2010
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thank you correction made
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Great and you are so welcome poet:)
Comment from Gungalo
What a great story line from reality this is. You captured the moments and drove home the desperation felt. Sigh, such a dire happening.
Love this:
in this hole where I am resident
I got to speak to the president
it gets so hard not to give up hope
all the prayers help us cope
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What a great story line from reality this is. You captured the moments and drove home the desperation felt. Sigh, such a dire happening.
Love this:
in this hole where I am resident
I got to speak to the president
it gets so hard not to give up hope
all the prayers help us cope
Comment Written 13-Oct-2010
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thank you for the review
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My pleasure!
Comment from JSway
You have stopped in your busy day to give voice to others in the world who have seen fear and darkness, and then continued hope and love. I can tell this work is written from the heart, from the need to do something to hold these brave men's hands in spirit, while hoping with their loves ones who waited above ground. Thank you for this selfless act of humanity and compassion. Love it!
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You have stopped in your busy day to give voice to others in the world who have seen fear and darkness, and then continued hope and love. I can tell this work is written from the heart, from the need to do something to hold these brave men's hands in spirit, while hoping with their loves ones who waited above ground. Thank you for this selfless act of humanity and compassion. Love it!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2010
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thank you for this kind review.
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You're so welcome:)
Comment from Shirley B
This is such a great poem. All the world is rejoicing. They just brought up the last miner. All of them have been rescued. Isn't that wonderful? Thank you for writing this great poem of hope, Shirley
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This is such a great poem. All the world is rejoicing. They just brought up the last miner. All of them have been rescued. Isn't that wonderful? Thank you for writing this great poem of hope, Shirley
Comment Written 13-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2010
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yes it is wonderful. thank you for the review
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yes it is wonderful. thank you for the review