Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Chasing my Tail."memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from Sandy P.
dear keimosobie - great description of lessons learned from books in college versus the real learning from the "college of life". A lot of the seemingly useless information never prepares us for the real world. Great job with this funny and clever write.
Sandy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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dear keimosobie - great description of lessons learned from books in college versus the real learning from the "college of life". A lot of the seemingly useless information never prepares us for the real world. Great job with this funny and clever write.
Sandy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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thanks for your excellent reply
Comment from fictionwriter
An interesting little poem. I know that sometimes I feel like a dog chasing its tail and never getting anywhere. I enjoyed this. Great job.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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An interesting little poem. I know that sometimes I feel like a dog chasing its tail and never getting anywhere. I enjoyed this. Great job.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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glad you liked it.
Comment from Thesis
I think you got it right. ost of the college courses you will never use again. Grades in most of them really don't matter, except that society wants to see your GPA.
If school can teach you to think objectively, then it's worth it. Most times, people wind up like the pup. - Thesis
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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I think you got it right. ost of the college courses you will never use again. Grades in most of them really don't matter, except that society wants to see your GPA.
If school can teach you to think objectively, then it's worth it. Most times, people wind up like the pup. - Thesis
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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right on man.
Comment from Pen&Ink
Hello keimosobie,
An interestind and accurate depiction of a game many of us have played. Our heads stuffed full of facts, with no clue as to how to apply any of it. The key is to learn to think for ourselves. You nailed it.
Ray
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Hello keimosobie,
An interestind and accurate depiction of a game many of us have played. Our heads stuffed full of facts, with no clue as to how to apply any of it. The key is to learn to think for ourselves. You nailed it.
Ray
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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thanks for the review
Comment from Robert D Wilson
Very nice, keimosobie, and humorous as well! I love the juxtposition between all of the "you think" and "I think" phrases. Then you cap off this wonderfull poem with two fantastic contrasting illustrations which bring the wole thing to a delightful point of conflict.
Thank you for sharing this whimisical piece!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Very nice, keimosobie, and humorous as well! I love the juxtposition between all of the "you think" and "I think" phrases. Then you cap off this wonderfull poem with two fantastic contrasting illustrations which bring the wole thing to a delightful point of conflict.
Thank you for sharing this whimisical piece!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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your welcome.
Comment from percival86jack
We learn all the basics in school and are set free to sale our own course. Most of us will choose the right path... kudos! Cheers, Jack
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We learn all the basics in school and are set free to sale our own course. Most of us will choose the right path... kudos! Cheers, Jack
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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thank for the great review.
Comment from Realist101
Hi there! Welcome to FanStory! I have a son in school, and he is learning that life can certainly be like this...your poem is original and well done, I would like to see you use think in this a little less often, but it does convey what you say. ") GOOD work!! ") Susan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Hi there! Welcome to FanStory! I have a son in school, and he is learning that life can certainly be like this...your poem is original and well done, I would like to see you use think in this a little less often, but it does convey what you say. ") GOOD work!! ") Susan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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thanks for your review.
Comment from jason456
What an interesting and oh so true poem. Your descriptive words tell a lesson in itself. I love the way you wrote this and the image is perfect.
Patti :)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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What an interesting and oh so true poem. Your descriptive words tell a lesson in itself. I love the way you wrote this and the image is perfect.
Patti :)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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thank you. i enjoyed writting it.
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And I enjoyed reading it.
Patti :)
Comment from pugrpoems
Dear keimosobie,
There is so much thinking going on. Great philosophy and insight! you flow well, and end well. Good job!! No problems or errors. pugrpoems.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Dear keimosobie,
There is so much thinking going on. Great philosophy and insight! you flow well, and end well. Good job!! No problems or errors. pugrpoems.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Thanks for your excellent.
Comment from InHisownwrite
Love this....
Very thought provoking...
My favorite: Am I a ship ready to sail?
Or just a dog, chasing my tail?
A very creative look at knowledge, where we take it...
what we do with it.... and life... Bryan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Love this....
Very thought provoking...
My favorite: Am I a ship ready to sail?
Or just a dog, chasing my tail?
A very creative look at knowledge, where we take it...
what we do with it.... and life... Bryan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Thank you bryan im glad you loved it.