CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Quilt of Nature"A collection of poetry
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Comment from tammipratt
I think the artwork is fabulous for this piece and complements it very well for the message you are conveying. Very clear and concise write - simple but effective.
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I think the artwork is fabulous for this piece and complements it very well for the message you are conveying. Very clear and concise write - simple but effective.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from MaureenC
As usual, you have produced an excellent description of the reqired prompt. You have created a colourful quilt in a very few words.
Mauseyc
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As usual, you have produced an excellent description of the reqired prompt. You have created a colourful quilt in a very few words.
Mauseyc
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from adewpearl
lovely image of the many-colored fall leaves as autumn's patchwork quilt, and you found the perfect illustration to illustrate it. excellent haiku form and a strong contest entry! Brooke
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lovely image of the many-colored fall leaves as autumn's patchwork quilt, and you found the perfect illustration to illustrate it. excellent haiku form and a strong contest entry! Brooke
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from cherry_rose
Beautiful imagery of the colors changing from summer to autumn. Autumn is one of the most beautiful times of year and your poem does a wonderful job of illustrating that.
cherry_
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Beautiful imagery of the colors changing from summer to autumn. Autumn is one of the most beautiful times of year and your poem does a wonderful job of illustrating that.
cherry_
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue...this is an excellent haiku. There are so few syllables allowed in this form but you have used yours well and have written a lovely poem. Well done. Good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
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Hi Sue...this is an excellent haiku. There are so few syllables allowed in this form but you have used yours well and have written a lovely poem. Well done. Good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from NikkiEl
Very well done! The picture and the quilt reference work perfectly together! I have no suggestions...perfect as it is! Thanks!
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Very well done! The picture and the quilt reference work perfectly together! I have no suggestions...perfect as it is! Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from joan marie
I am reading so much about people desperate for the warmth of spring and summer I was surprised to see you writing about autumn. It is my favorite time of the year, well when I lived where the leaves turned it was. joan marie
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I am reading so much about people desperate for the warmth of spring and summer I was surprised to see you writing about autumn. It is my favorite time of the year, well when I lived where the leaves turned it was. joan marie
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written, colorful poem with a smooth flow of words making for an easy read. There is excelent imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
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A very well written, colorful poem with a smooth flow of words making for an easy read. There is excelent imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Although these are few
words they paint a picture
of their own - presented as
a haiku = an ideal entry for
the contest.
Good luck Sue.
Margaret.
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Although these are few
words they paint a picture
of their own - presented as
a haiku = an ideal entry for
the contest.
Good luck Sue.
Margaret.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - A beautiful Haiku of the Autumn colors. You paint a wonderful descriptive image of that quilt. But shouldn't we be writing about Spring? LOL. Enjoyed it. Charlie
PS - For my story, does Sue stand for Susan?
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2009
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Sue - A beautiful Haiku of the Autumn colors. You paint a wonderful descriptive image of that quilt. But shouldn't we be writing about Spring? LOL. Enjoyed it. Charlie
PS - For my story, does Sue stand for Susan?
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2009
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Hi Charles. Yeah, I don't know why the contest was about autumn! HA!! I'm still waiting for summer. Thanks for your review. (The name is "Sue"). I can't believe you're really going to put me in one of your stories!! :-))