CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Galleries of Treasure"A collection of poetry
47 total reviews
Comment from Carol D Parker
Very clever. I love the way your mind works. Good strong words. Glad somenoe apreciates the masters are still alive. Let's remember the poor soul, Van Gogh who only wanted a companion. Your poem is a real winner. Good luck in the contest.
Delora
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Very clever. I love the way your mind works. Good strong words. Glad somenoe apreciates the masters are still alive. Let's remember the poor soul, Van Gogh who only wanted a companion. Your poem is a real winner. Good luck in the contest.
Delora
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Delora, thanks so much for your lovely compliments. And great review. You always keep me SO encouraged! Sue :-))
Comment from jeslaf
Well if this isn't the perfect write for you, my dear--I love the way your personality, your deep appreciation for the arts, shines right through. Old palettes-new inspiration. Great job! :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Well if this isn't the perfect write for you, my dear--I love the way your personality, your deep appreciation for the arts, shines right through. Old palettes-new inspiration. Great job! :)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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And isn't this a "glowing and shining" review!! So much appreciated. Always encouraging. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good Thursday morning poet friend Susy.
A very interesting presentation for the contest. Another new style for me.
I do wish you the best in the contest.
I hope you have a great day!
Loyd
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Good Thursday morning poet friend Susy.
A very interesting presentation for the contest. Another new style for me.
I do wish you the best in the contest.
I hope you have a great day!
Loyd
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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And good morning to you, Loyd. Another new style for me, also. Thank you for your well-wishes and lovely review. Sue
Comment from Tedisking
What I pictured in my head was a long hall. There were statues of the masters of the house on both sides. A butler would lead the way explaining to the new comer at his first stay. Is this the image you were trying to convey?
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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What I pictured in my head was a long hall. There were statues of the masters of the house on both sides. A butler would lead the way explaining to the new comer at his first stay. Is this the image you were trying to convey?
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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No, it's an ode to the Great Masters of art. Like Michelangelo, El Greco, etc. And how their artwork lives on even after hundreds of years because of how it still impacts us all. But, loved your visions as well! HA! Thanks for your very kind review. Sue
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Aw well at least I tried :P
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Ha! I've had my times when I missed a poem's meaning by miles! At least you were in the ballpark! :-))
Comment from Roisin
THis is lovely Sue. We sometimes become so relient on the pictures to enhance our words, it's lovely to see the words standing on their own. That's what you have here. A beautiful Septolet. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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THis is lovely Sue. We sometimes become so relient on the pictures to enhance our words, it's lovely to see the words standing on their own. That's what you have here. A beautiful Septolet. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Roisin, thanks so much for your great compliment! This was a new poetic form I'd not heard of. Had to try it. You know how I love entering the contests of these short poems! HA! And thanks for your great review. Sue :-))
Comment from dportwood
The Septolet poem is a challenge because of the 14 word restriction and the two part requirement. You have done very well with this one and I wish you well in the contest.
Duane
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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The Septolet poem is a challenge because of the 14 word restriction and the two part requirement. You have done very well with this one and I wish you well in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Duane, thanks very much for your very generous review. And your well-wishes. With regards, Sue
Comment from rmdelta
Sue, this was great, and I have to admit that it was exciting as well. Whoever would a thunk my dear friend Sue would be involved in writing about sextuplets? Not I. Good luck in the contest. lol
Reggie
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Sue, this was great, and I have to admit that it was exciting as well. Whoever would a thunk my dear friend Sue would be involved in writing about sextuplets? Not I. Good luck in the contest. lol
Reggie
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Hey, if it had one more line allowed, it would be an "optolet" and I could have written a greater one on "OCTOMOM" ! LOL!! Now, get back to watching the news and explain to me why 'bama is going on JAY LENO show!! I'm MORTIFIED!!!
Comment from Rottie
AH HA! You have to use the rules to paint the picture with words, yes? That is what all poetry should be, but alas. . . I find pictures can enhance the words alaso. Yours was two words
Right On!
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AH HA! You have to use the rules to paint the picture with words, yes? That is what all poetry should be, but alas. . . I find pictures can enhance the words alaso. Yours was two words
Right On!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
Comment from honeytree
I really liked your words written about
"Galleries of Treasure."
Yes "The Masters have left wonderful legacies of Genius"
Wonderful words written here.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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I really liked your words written about
"Galleries of Treasure."
Yes "The Masters have left wonderful legacies of Genius"
Wonderful words written here.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Honeytree, so glad you really liked this one. I get real emotional about art! Ha! Thanks for your lovely review. Sue :-))
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I love your work.I always do you have great talent. Honeytree.
Comment from Judian James
I love this piece Sue, most especially your second bit ... perfect summation of your premise. Because it's so short, I think I might consider not having caps. at the beginning of every line but only at the beginning of the two individual "verses" just a thought that I think might actually bring more power to this short write. Excellent!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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I love this piece Sue, most especially your second bit ... perfect summation of your premise. Because it's so short, I think I might consider not having caps. at the beginning of every line but only at the beginning of the two individual "verses" just a thought that I think might actually bring more power to this short write. Excellent!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009
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Jude, I owe ya big time! I've just changed it and WOW, much better! I am so used to capitalizing first letter in each line, it was like my habit just took over. But, with this piece, the capital letters were large and overwhelming. THANK YOU!!! Sue :-))
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Hey, what goes around comes around, right? Gosh, it's so much better now.
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MUCH better! :-))