CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "The Bridge"A collection of poetry
81 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Superb! I love the inspired message and the well crafted essence...true to form with internal rhyming. Have to read the others, but this one may get my vote.
Lots of love,
rama devi
  |
Superb! I love the inspired message and the well crafted essence...true to form with internal rhyming. Have to read the others, but this one may get my vote.
Lots of love,
rama devi
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from jmkenpo
I love these little writing challenges. I am always intrigued how someone can say so much in short a few words. Good luck in the contest - Jmkenpo
|
I love these little writing challenges. I am always intrigued how someone can say so much in short a few words. Good luck in the contest - Jmkenpo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from fictionwriter
For such a short little poem, this carries a huge punch. It is true that the loss always gives way to something better in the end. Great job.
|
For such a short little poem, this carries a huge punch. It is true that the loss always gives way to something better in the end. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello again poet friend.
Wow, I like that style and loved your wonderful message as well. I might give this a try later.
Have a great day!
Loyd
|
Hello again poet friend.
Wow, I like that style and loved your wonderful message as well. I might give this a try later.
Have a great day!
Loyd
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from schlosslaw_2000
An excellent poem generated by a thought well phrased, Sixteezkid. Hope can also arrive from afformation from others as you have noted in your bio. Keep on, keeping on.:) Larry
|
An excellent poem generated by a thought well phrased, Sixteezkid. Hope can also arrive from afformation from others as you have noted in your bio. Keep on, keeping on.:) Larry
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
You did a great job on this poem with only two lines. It made a strong statement in such a few words. The artwork was very fitting for the poem. Nice Job.
|
You did a great job on this poem with only two lines. It made a strong statement in such a few words. The artwork was very fitting for the poem. Nice Job.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from amada
That artwork is precious. It caught my eyes those lovings shapes and colors. A great selection for the bridges in our life. Hope helps us to hang on.
|
That artwork is precious. It caught my eyes those lovings shapes and colors. A great selection for the bridges in our life. Hope helps us to hang on.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Sue, once again you've written a beautiful entry for the contest. Simple words that convey a deep and universal truth.
great work - sherry
|
Sue, once again you've written a beautiful entry for the contest. Simple words that convey a deep and universal truth.
great work - sherry
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from lkatka
I've been reading these poems for this particular contest and I've been fascinated by them. I really like the concept of yours. It provokes a feeling in readers.
|
I've been reading these poems for this particular contest and I've been fascinated by them. I really like the concept of yours. It provokes a feeling in readers.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
I did not note the internal rhyme. Maybe you could point it out? Forgive me, sometimes I just don't catch on. Nonetheless, good job on creating this haiku.I found no errors. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
|
I did not note the internal rhyme. Maybe you could point it out? Forgive me, sometimes I just don't catch on. Nonetheless, good job on creating this haiku.I found no errors. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
-
Yes, they are "arrives" and "lives". Thanks very much for your very kind review. Sue :-))