CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very good clarity poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great job. Hugs, Teri
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This is a very good clarity poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great job. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from findingmyroom
Your words are so true. I find your last line the most interesting here, as you use the word proof to show that there is no proof, so to speak, that life is unpredictable.
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Your words are so true. I find your last line the most interesting here, as you use the word proof to show that there is no proof, so to speak, that life is unpredictable.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Journey woman
The cadence fulfilled with few words. The vision painted accurately. I loved the use of the word "happenstance." It's not seen very often.
Very nice,
Journey Woman
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The cadence fulfilled with few words. The vision painted accurately. I loved the use of the word "happenstance." It's not seen very often.
Very nice,
Journey Woman
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from becky7777
your so right nothing is assured in this life of ours. just when we think we got it boom fate has a surprise. great writting. good luck in the contest.
Becky
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your so right nothing is assured in this life of ours. just when we think we got it boom fate has a surprise. great writting. good luck in the contest.
Becky
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from jshep
Fantastic interpretation of fate, in fact, one of the best I have ever read. Truly wish I had a six for this is so deserving in the insightful message and perfection of a clarity Pyamid poem. One of the best I have seen. Your words are up there with Kahil Kibran in philosophical message. Brilliant, Sue. Joyce
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Fantastic interpretation of fate, in fact, one of the best I have ever read. Truly wish I had a six for this is so deserving in the insightful message and perfection of a clarity Pyamid poem. One of the best I have seen. Your words are up there with Kahil Kibran in philosophical message. Brilliant, Sue. Joyce
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from dportwood
Nice job on this highly structured writing style. Tells the whole story in an easy-reading format. I wish you well in the contest.
Duane
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Nice job on this highly structured writing style. Tells the whole story in an easy-reading format. I wish you well in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Winslow
Dear Sixteen,
Very well done, you have clearly defined fate. I like the body, beginning and ending.
Good luck in the contest, you have a strong entry.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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Dear Sixteen,
Very well done, you have clearly defined fate. I like the body, beginning and ending.
Good luck in the contest, you have a strong entry.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Psychonaut X
Very nice work. Fits the syllable structure to a T and even looks pretty. I liked the rhyming of "perchance" and "happenstance." The last line was a very fitting quote. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very nice work. Fits the syllable structure to a T and even looks pretty. I liked the rhyming of "perchance" and "happenstance." The last line was a very fitting quote. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Annelisa
This is an excellent clarity poem. I like your choice of topics. FATE. So many things could have been said but only you could have summed it up so well. Annelisa
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This is an excellent clarity poem. I like your choice of topics. FATE. So many things could have been said but only you could have summed it up so well. Annelisa
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is a well done clarity pyramid that is a good contest entry I liked this one well presented and reads well regards Fuller
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This is a well done clarity pyramid that is a good contest entry I liked this one well presented and reads well regards Fuller
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009