CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Consanguinity"A collection of poetry
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Comment from prodigal
I can definately see the little tea cup. Good job with that. I had to break out the ole dictionary again for this one. Interesting word choice. Well done- Good luck in the contest. - Sam
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I can definately see the little tea cup. Good job with that. I had to break out the ole dictionary again for this one. Interesting word choice. Well done- Good luck in the contest. - Sam
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from findingmyroom
This is an adorable form, and your poem is an exquisite example of it. What a warm and inviting word you chose. Interestingly, when I look at your presentation, it almost appears that your art is the steam curling from the cup!
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This is an adorable form, and your poem is an exquisite example of it. What a warm and inviting word you chose. Interestingly, when I look at your presentation, it almost appears that your art is the steam curling from the cup!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning Sue
I enjoyed your poem, learned something new. You followed the rules very nicely!
Good work and good luck, Loyd
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Good morning Sue
I enjoyed your poem, learned something new. You followed the rules very nicely!
Good work and good luck, Loyd
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from Roisin
I never saw this form before - I love it. You really do learn something on this site every day. This is a wonderful entry. You've adhered to the rules well and produced wonderful words and a great picture to accompany it. I love your saucer statement. It really does clarify and sum it all up. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
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I never saw this form before - I love it. You really do learn something on this site every day. This is a wonderful entry. You've adhered to the rules well and produced wonderful words and a great picture to accompany it. I love your saucer statement. It really does clarify and sum it all up. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from Domino
Morning, Sue
Thank goodness you saved me a trip to the dictionary. Mind you, I forgot the word already ;-)
Love the last line twist from 'Family matters'. - clever.
Looks like an interesting format and sorry I missed it. On the other hand maybe it's a good thing as I'd probably have come up with a naughty word. LOL.
Excellent entry and I wish you the best in contest.
Love, Ray xx
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Morning, Sue
Thank goodness you saved me a trip to the dictionary. Mind you, I forgot the word already ;-)
Love the last line twist from 'Family matters'. - clever.
Looks like an interesting format and sorry I missed it. On the other hand maybe it's a good thing as I'd probably have come up with a naughty word. LOL.
Excellent entry and I wish you the best in contest.
Love, Ray xx
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Yeah, and you would have been booted....ahem...(again). LOL!! Thanks for your great review, Ray
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LMAO. I haven't been for almost a week now ;-) xx
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Is that a record? LMAO!!
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Yep! But better not speak too soon. You sound in cheery spirits? xx
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Trying very hard. Thanks for asking. :-))
Comment from Minglement
Very, very nice entry for this contest. I couldn't find in the rules where the words had to be related to the dictionary word, but that must be the case, otherwise why call it a 'dictionary word', right? Do you know anything more about the form that what is given in the 'rules' This is a great entry, and your art and colors are fantastic. Love the 'tree' theme, given your them. Good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Very, very nice entry for this contest. I couldn't find in the rules where the words had to be related to the dictionary word, but that must be the case, otherwise why call it a 'dictionary word', right? Do you know anything more about the form that what is given in the 'rules' This is a great entry, and your art and colors are fantastic. Love the 'tree' theme, given your them. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Marcia, I'd never heard of this type of poem before. I just 'googled' it to see if there was anything on it. Nothing there. Thanks for commenting on the artwork, as I liked the "family tree" painting. And thanks for your very kind review. Regards, Sue
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I thought about googling, but I think it's newly created, not mainstream at all. Thanks for the reply. Always a pleasure to read your work, Sue. Take care, Marcia
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written poem with a unique structure. The smooth flow of words makes for a very easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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A very well written poem with a unique structure. The smooth flow of words makes for a very easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Charlie, thanks so much for your very kind review. Just had to try to "tea poem" :-)) Sue
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You're welcome, Sue. Charlie
Comment from Hitcher
Thank you very much for the notes, without which I would of still been scratching my head. Once I'd read the notes the penny dropped and the creativity of what I'd just read became obvious. You DAZZLE, take a bow!
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Thank you very much for the notes, without which I would of still been scratching my head. Once I'd read the notes the penny dropped and the creativity of what I'd just read became obvious. You DAZZLE, take a bow!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from words
Great use of format. Fun. Loved the word you picked...it roles off of the tongue. Clean,simple and straight forward.
"Families Matter" is a great ending.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Great use of format. Fun. Loved the word you picked...it roles off of the tongue. Clean,simple and straight forward.
"Families Matter" is a great ending.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Ha! I was like you. "rolls off the tongue". Thanks for commenting on that last line. And for your great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from MJMuraco
Sue, you are great at writing poems with rules that dictate what meter, shape or rhyme is required. I am thankful that you always use author notes to explain. I have not been that daring in that I still just write rhyming poems. Great job.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Sue, you are great at writing poems with rules that dictate what meter, shape or rhyme is required. I am thankful that you always use author notes to explain. I have not been that daring in that I still just write rhyming poems. Great job.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I double-dare you then!! HA!! Go for it! Not difficult. Just gotta love words. And I know you love words! Thanks so much for your very generous review. Sue :-))