CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Tangible Hope"A collection of poetry
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Comment from chaswriter
Sue - Hope that you are feeling better. A little darkness with a lot of hope with a loved one helping. I enjoyed this poem with its nice flow and good rhyme. Charlie
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Sue - Hope that you are feeling better. A little darkness with a lot of hope with a loved one helping. I enjoyed this poem with its nice flow and good rhyme. Charlie
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from SteveI
oh I dream of turning her head by the soft tilt of her chin with my rough but loving fingertips to feel the lips of hers touching mine. Wow That is special and well written. Very romantic.
Thank you
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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oh I dream of turning her head by the soft tilt of her chin with my rough but loving fingertips to feel the lips of hers touching mine. Wow That is special and well written. Very romantic.
Thank you
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Steve, your review is poetry in itself. Such beautiful expression of desire. Absolutely beautiful! Thank you for that. Sue
Comment from findingmyroom
Glad you're back, and I hope it's not a lingering ailment. This poem is gorgeous; I love the concept of hope being present in tears. Feel better.
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Glad you're back, and I hope it's not a lingering ailment. This poem is gorgeous; I love the concept of hope being present in tears. Feel better.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from adewpearl
Okay, three for three in the extremely thoughtful poem category - this one is also profound and lovely - excellent rhyming quatrains and a message of hope and renewal. You're on a philosophical roll! :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Okay, three for three in the extremely thoughtful poem category - this one is also profound and lovely - excellent rhyming quatrains and a message of hope and renewal. You're on a philosophical roll! :-) Brooke
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Brooke, yes, I guess I am in a philosophical mood. Much pondering going on. Thankful that poetry is there to let it all out! Thanks for your great review. Sue :-))
Comment from Cedar
I enjoy reading well written love poems, as this one is.
The rhythm makes it so easy to read. The last two sentences were my favorite.
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I enjoy reading well written love poems, as this one is.
The rhythm makes it so easy to read. The last two sentences were my favorite.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from justmade
Glad to have you back Sue I hope you are feeling much better now. This is a wonderful poem. It is very simple and sincere which is one of the thing I like about it.
Much love,
Justmade.
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Glad to have you back Sue I hope you are feeling much better now. This is a wonderful poem. It is very simple and sincere which is one of the thing I like about it.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Judian James
I understand first hand about being sick. I lost an entire week from the site! I hope you're feeling better soon. This is a charming piece on falling in love "And spoke of hope, which lies within The drops of all my tears" loved it.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2009
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I understand first hand about being sick. I lost an entire week from the site! I hope you're feeling better soon. This is a charming piece on falling in love "And spoke of hope, which lies within The drops of all my tears" loved it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2009
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I do remember when you took a "leave of absence" with that terrible flu. I'm feeling much better, thank you. And thanks for your review. Always appreciated, Jude
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Great poem good message, love the imagery and the thoughts behind it. You done a great job with this and with a clear message vision of life. (QQ) There were no errors. No typos and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. And Bully ,bully for you QQ
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Great poem good message, love the imagery and the thoughts behind it. You done a great job with this and with a clear message vision of life. (QQ) There were no errors. No typos and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. And Bully ,bully for you QQ
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from artsygal
This was a great poem about how love can heal and give hope. I love the Lazarus image conjured at the end. You combine ideas in fresh ways and make the rhyming seem secondary, which is the sign of skilled writer.
I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
Hugs for the beauty,
artsygal
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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This was a great poem about how love can heal and give hope. I love the Lazarus image conjured at the end. You combine ideas in fresh ways and make the rhyming seem secondary, which is the sign of skilled writer.
I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
Hugs for the beauty,
artsygal
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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artsygal, your compliments of my work mean everything....so encouraging. I just want to keep learning and writing. Thank you for your lovely review. With warmest regards, Sue
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You are most welcome! :-)
Comment from Roisin
Sue, this is absolutely beautiful. I haven't been online for the last week (I'll PM you about that later) and this was just a joy to come back to. Your rhymes and rhythm are wonderful and the words practicaly sing to me. Great job and well worth six stars.
Hugs
Roisin
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Sue, this is absolutely beautiful. I haven't been online for the last week (I'll PM you about that later) and this was just a joy to come back to. Your rhymes and rhythm are wonderful and the words practicaly sing to me. Great job and well worth six stars.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009