Comment from Nanette Mary

Excellent

Hullo Sixteezkid ...

There is nothing to suggest changing in this English Sonnet in which you have good rhyming throughout. You have expressed your thoughts clearly providing readers with a few minutes of pleasant reading.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards

Excellent

Very-very nice forgiving narrative! Your sonnet is a wonderful word painting which exceeds the artwork chosen. Good job!

Dave

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from Valerie Julia Ann

Excellent

Very nice writing. A sonnet is a challenge for someone that started writing last November. The artwork is complementary to your opus. I love it. Valerie

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from Josipher32

Excellent

I absolutely loved the picture choice and matching color scheme. This was a nicely written romantic engish sonnet. But since it is romantic, you maybe should put this under the "Romance Poetry" category instead of "General Poetry" Just a thought.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2009

Hi Josipher, thanks for the tip. I always forget to categorize my poems. I took your suggestion and did just that. Thanks very much for your review and compliments. With regards, Sue

Comment from Ms. Gray

Excellent

Very nice sonnet. Not an easy poetry form and you did an excellent job. I like the image of the melting snow and the the flight and delight rhyme. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

This is really very good,
my friend - a great entry
for the contest - the words
run smoothly, and there's good
rhythm and rhyme.

Good luck,
Margaret.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from Lokman

Excellent

Wow! It looks like you learned a lot already in these months. This was very good from my point of view--you have an obvious talent for words and it shows.
Nicely done,
Lokman

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from KYPollard/El Gato

Excellent

You did a wonderful job in creating and presenting your poem. It was a true pleausre to read. I found no errors to note. Great job. You should do well.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from earthlybeing

Excellent

This is a great sonnet. Love the flow and meaning. Love can break down the hardest of defenses with only a hush. How great is that. Thanks, Jeanette

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

Very good, a complicated piece. You did a beautiful job on this piece. Finding and accepting new love can sometimes be hard, but the rewards are substantial.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2009