CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from debskatz
Hey Sue,
Well, ya know, you're quite right! In the moment, it doesn't really matter! Thanks for sharing that insight with us!!
smiles,
deb
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Hey Sue,
Well, ya know, you're quite right! In the moment, it doesn't really matter! Thanks for sharing that insight with us!!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from P1
he sue, yeah you are so right at the time
it makes no difference but it sure does
afterwards. good luck in this contest
this is a very good entry. hugs lynda
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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he sue, yeah you are so right at the time
it makes no difference but it sure does
afterwards. good luck in this contest
this is a very good entry. hugs lynda
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Lynda, it does make a difference afterwards. Usually, our chemistry doesn't lie to us. Thanks so much for your very kind review! Sue :-))
Comment from howling harp
we all have those moments. i have come to learn that the strength of a kiss given with love is far more erotic and sensual than full blown lust without it. thanks for the forum to state this simple truth. i liked your work in that my weakness for my love recognizes this tension. i have lived it.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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we all have those moments. i have come to learn that the strength of a kiss given with love is far more erotic and sensual than full blown lust without it. thanks for the forum to state this simple truth. i liked your work in that my weakness for my love recognizes this tension. i have lived it.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Yes, most of us have. Our chemical attractions don't usually lie to us. They tell us there is something far deeper than the surface. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. And for your very kind review. Very much appreciated, Sue
Comment from mark tree
sixteezkid very good entry that tells a lot of truth about love and lust, but don't you think too many love/lust only for the moment. Good luck in the contest.
marcus....
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sixteezkid very good entry that tells a lot of truth about love and lust, but don't you think too many love/lust only for the moment. Good luck in the contest.
marcus....
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Sue, I am afrain you are very correct with the message of this poem. Good style and thanks for the interesting read. The artwork was perfect. Loyd
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Sue, I am afrain you are very correct with the message of this poem. Good style and thanks for the interesting read. The artwork was perfect. Loyd
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from minopavlic
An exceptional poem looking at love from a different perspective.All too often we take the beauty of love,in her vulnurability for granted,until it's shattered never to return in it's original majestic beauty.
Very inspiring
No_obstacle
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An exceptional poem looking at love from a different perspective.All too often we take the beauty of love,in her vulnurability for granted,until it's shattered never to return in it's original majestic beauty.
Very inspiring
No_obstacle
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from shimmeringlights
Yep, caught up in those moments the only thing that matters is esctacy. Great short poem, lot to read in so few words. Great use of this style. Best wishes.
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Yep, caught up in those moments the only thing that matters is esctacy. Great short poem, lot to read in so few words. Great use of this style. Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from fictionwriter
I love this short little poem. How true that is, we don't really know the difference sometimes. Love is always lasting, but lust is gone soon. Great work again.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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I love this short little poem. How true that is, we don't really know the difference sometimes. Love is always lasting, but lust is gone soon. Great work again.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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fictionwriter, so glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for your very kind review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - LOL. I have to admit that my wife and I have this standing joke that I married her for lust and she married me for my money. Of course, at that time I was broke but madly in love. Enjoyed your poem and thanks for the memory. Charlie
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Sue - LOL. I have to admit that my wife and I have this standing joke that I married her for lust and she married me for my money. Of course, at that time I was broke but madly in love. Enjoyed your poem and thanks for the memory. Charlie
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Awww!! What a great story! Now THAT's love to have a cute joke like that between you. Thanks for sharing that. And for your very nice review. :-)) Sue
Comment from NadineM
Very true! For in the moment, our focus is not in the why.
Good job with the syllable count.
Best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Very true! For in the moment, our focus is not in the why.
Good job with the syllable count.
Best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Nadine, great when chemistry works so well! HA! Thanks very much for your great review and compliments. With regards, Sue