CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Rachon
Your work is so good. I enjoy reading your writing.
Heroin is the devil in sheep"s clothing, crack is now it's twin. Our world could do without both.
Your poem tells the tale well.
Yours,
Rachon
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Your work is so good. I enjoy reading your writing.
Heroin is the devil in sheep"s clothing, crack is now it's twin. Our world could do without both.
Your poem tells the tale well.
Yours,
Rachon
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is a compelling and thought-provoking poem. Addiction is so strong and challenging for the addict as well as the family members.
I also wrote a poem with similar theme. I will post it soon.
Roisin
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This is a compelling and thought-provoking poem. Addiction is so strong and challenging for the addict as well as the family members.
I also wrote a poem with similar theme. I will post it soon.
Roisin
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Mr edd
You have created a very powerful piece here, it is truly moving. And the combination of the poem and the strong picture work very well.
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You have created a very powerful piece here, it is truly moving. And the combination of the poem and the strong picture work very well.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from mermaids
You capture the feeling of one who longs for the next fix, well written and you demonstrate the delusion of heroin, hell waits after the high.
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You capture the feeling of one who longs for the next fix, well written and you demonstrate the delusion of heroin, hell waits after the high.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue....this is a gut wrenching poem. It speaks well of heroin addiction and the horrors associated with it. What a horrible thing it must be to crave a drug that you know is going to kill you. You wrote this very well.....you have a good rhyme and flow....blessings.....chey
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Hi Sue....this is a gut wrenching poem. It speaks well of heroin addiction and the horrors associated with it. What a horrible thing it must be to crave a drug that you know is going to kill you. You wrote this very well.....you have a good rhyme and flow....blessings.....chey
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from mmichelle97219
I lived with a meth addict for many years and know the cycle of both the addicted and those trying to help them. I thought you wrote about it well.
happy writing.
Michelle
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I lived with a meth addict for many years and know the cycle of both the addicted and those trying to help them. I thought you wrote about it well.
happy writing.
Michelle
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
Thought this poem says a lot. It shows how an addict longs to be someone or something else. And can be, even if only for a while. I thought it was nicely worded. Pic was a nice touch.
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Thought this poem says a lot. It shows how an addict longs to be someone or something else. And can be, even if only for a while. I thought it was nicely worded. Pic was a nice touch.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from sara-beth
You know I have a relative who was addicted to it as well, and that is exactly how she described it. She said it just felt like nothing, like floating in a dream of nothing that was so perfect.....very strange and sad. Great poem, very real.
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You know I have a relative who was addicted to it as well, and that is exactly how she described it. She said it just felt like nothing, like floating in a dream of nothing that was so perfect.....very strange and sad. Great poem, very real.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from colinmalone
That was really great well do it touched me. Very sad poem which i felt painted a vivid picture. The flow was great, I cant see anything to change just a work to be proud off, well done.
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That was really great well do it touched me. Very sad poem which i felt painted a vivid picture. The flow was great, I cant see anything to change just a work to be proud off, well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Gemma Perkins
i really like the way you start and end with the same line. it seems to round it off well, and i think although each line is the same they both carry different meaning. the first saying how the addict is bound for a rush, but the later saying how the addicts addiction could lead to death. very good rhyme scheme too
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i really like the way you start and end with the same line. it seems to round it off well, and i think although each line is the same they both carry different meaning. the first saying how the addict is bound for a rush, but the later saying how the addicts addiction could lead to death. very good rhyme scheme too
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009