CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 93 "Blackjack Blues"A collection of poetry
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Comment from smiles
I do believe you met the goal of this challenge.
Fun poem with great poetic rhythm.
Light and playful. has a good flow.
smiles
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I do believe you met the goal of this challenge.
Fun poem with great poetic rhythm.
Light and playful. has a good flow.
smiles
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
Comment from Koba
Very well done! aYou bring out the thrill and disappontment of gambling very well with your words. I am sthe same way when I go to gamble, thrilled with the chance to win but well aware that I will lose. The biggest reason I do it very rarely!
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Very well done! aYou bring out the thrill and disappontment of gambling very well with your words. I am sthe same way when I go to gamble, thrilled with the chance to win but well aware that I will lose. The biggest reason I do it very rarely!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue...this is such a fun poem with a good ending that made me laugh. You have used the required words cleverly and if I didn't know better I would have thought you used them just for the sake of the poem. Good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
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Hi Sue...this is such a fun poem with a good ending that made me laugh. You have used the required words cleverly and if I didn't know better I would have thought you used them just for the sake of the poem. Good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
Comment from FredCollingwood
Sixteez!
I love your writing. I don't know how you can write with such rhyme and meter, especially given the words for the contest. Good luck in it.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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Sixteez!
I love your writing. I don't know how you can write with such rhyme and meter, especially given the words for the contest. Good luck in it.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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Fred,
You're causing me to blush! I credit my rhyme and meter to entering loads of various contests so I could learn what the heck it all meant. And to Domino, who taught me so much - by observing his writing and his reviews, which didn't let me get away with anything! HA!
Still studying and learning. Thank you so much for your lovely review and compliments. So glad you enjoyed this poem.
With regards,
Sue
Comment from MJMuraco
This was a very cute poem. It flowed nicely and used all of the words required in the contest. I have played blackjack in Vegas. It is so much fun yet I always end up loosing what I have won. That is why the casinos are so beautiful and we keep coming back.
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This was a very cute poem. It flowed nicely and used all of the words required in the contest. I have played blackjack in Vegas. It is so much fun yet I always end up loosing what I have won. That is why the casinos are so beautiful and we keep coming back.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Roisin
I love this. It's an excellent poem with an interesting topic. Your rhyme and rhythm are great and you've done a great job incorporating all the words. Best of luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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I love this. It's an excellent poem with an interesting topic. Your rhyme and rhythm are great and you've done a great job incorporating all the words. Best of luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from jack silver
well this poem was really well written. i also checked to see that you had all the words you said you did and you had and i wish you the best in the contest and look forward to getting my hands on more of your glories work.
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well this poem was really well written. i also checked to see that you had all the words you said you did and you had and i wish you the best in the contest and look forward to getting my hands on more of your glories work.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
Good presentation and unique entry too; creative; well written; a strong entry in my opinion; well done! no corrections; best wishes in the voting booth!
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Good presentation and unique entry too; creative; well written; a strong entry in my opinion; well done! no corrections; best wishes in the voting booth!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from mmichelle97219
It has a very good readable beat, and a well thought out meter. I loved your use of the required words. They are unforced, and blend well. Good luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
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It has a very good readable beat, and a well thought out meter. I loved your use of the required words. They are unforced, and blend well. Good luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Kingsland
this poem is written in a very good form and format with good flowing thoughts. Gambling can be a very pleasuralbe thing to do. I liked the the rhythm in this well written verse. It was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
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this poem is written in a very good form and format with good flowing thoughts. Gambling can be a very pleasuralbe thing to do. I liked the the rhythm in this well written verse. It was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009