CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 142 "In Shatters"A collection of poetry
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Comment from cmay44
Hi again
Fine work on this one as well, fine poem pointing out the harm that can be done with words. Well done in every way.
colors and artwork make it a superb package.
God bless you
love from
Carolyn
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Hi again
Fine work on this one as well, fine poem pointing out the harm that can be done with words. Well done in every way.
colors and artwork make it a superb package.
God bless you
love from
Carolyn
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from easyeverett
I love Tetractys and this one you have penned is a beauty from the great form employed to the depth of the message imbued through your superior use of language. Most impressed sister sixties. easy
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I love Tetractys and this one you have penned is a beauty from the great form employed to the depth of the message imbued through your superior use of language. Most impressed sister sixties. easy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from starman
You depicted shattered glass and its vicious penetration of the flesh to perfection. I could imagine the soul bleeding from this.
Excellent.
;)s
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You depicted shattered glass and its vicious penetration of the flesh to perfection. I could imagine the soul bleeding from this.
Excellent.
;)s
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Curt Mongold
You're really good at these, aren't you? It is an interesting style, but the content you give it makes it work for me. Words can and do indeed hurt as much as a blow can.
A pleasure to read.
Sincerely,
Curt
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You're really good at these, aren't you? It is an interesting style, but the content you give it makes it work for me. Words can and do indeed hurt as much as a blow can.
A pleasure to read.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from phild
This style is very different. The first stanza was choppy and hard to read. The second stanza seemed easier. Aside from the style, I thought the message you were trying to get across was very good. The line "shards may be ... still seethes" is an excellent line.
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This style is very different. The first stanza was choppy and hard to read. The second stanza seemed easier. Aside from the style, I thought the message you were trying to get across was very good. The line "shards may be ... still seethes" is an excellent line.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
excellent piece of work. so profound and so true. it is easy to wound with words but not so easy to take those words back once the anger has dispelled.
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excellent piece of work. so profound and so true. it is easy to wound with words but not so easy to take those words back once the anger has dispelled.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Dogz
It's easier to hurt verbally than it is physically. People have no respect anymore with what they say or do. They have no control in life. It show with their language choice. Dogz
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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It's easier to hurt verbally than it is physically. People have no respect anymore with what they say or do. They have no control in life. It show with their language choice. Dogz
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Can anyone give me an AMEN!!!! Great summing up of it all! Thank you so much for your very generous review and great comments. Most appreciated with kind regards, Sue
Comment from nukrz
That is so cold! So quiet and heart breakingly honest! Wow, you did a wonderful job on your tetractys! Way to go SIXTEEZKID!
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That is so cold! So quiet and heart breakingly honest! Wow, you did a wonderful job on your tetractys! Way to go SIXTEEZKID!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from DragonSkulls
Wow, another great piece of poetry right here Sue. I like your mirrored tetractys. "Yet the burn still seethes" This is a powerful write. I loved it. /Ron
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Wow, another great piece of poetry right here Sue. I like your mirrored tetractys. "Yet the burn still seethes" This is a powerful write. I loved it. /Ron
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Jarlsbane
Nicely done... a very well written poem. Good flow and sound word choices... especially liked "shards" and "seethed". Great Job! Jarls
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Nicely done... a very well written poem. Good flow and sound word choices... especially liked "shards" and "seethed". Great Job! Jarls
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008