CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from adewpearl
excellent cadence and rhyme enhance this most nostalgic and warm story of your daddy's guitar playing - I love the specific detail of the songs and musicians he was inspired by and played
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excellent cadence and rhyme enhance this most nostalgic and warm story of your daddy's guitar playing - I love the specific detail of the songs and musicians he was inspired by and played
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from carolm5415
The sound of good old country music always takes me back to happy times in the country with my friends. We would drive around in an old truck, the guys with their guitars, smoking unfiltered cigarets and fumbling around trying to make out in the back of a pick up truck in the rain. You've written a great poem about your Daddy's banjo.
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The sound of good old country music always takes me back to happy times in the country with my friends. We would drive around in an old truck, the guys with their guitars, smoking unfiltered cigarets and fumbling around trying to make out in the back of a pick up truck in the rain. You've written a great poem about your Daddy's banjo.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Miska
What happy memories. A well written Poem. Each line had something to say and it flowed easily off the tongue.
great work. regards Miska
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What happy memories. A well written Poem. Each line had something to say and it flowed easily off the tongue.
great work. regards Miska
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from daysofdeath1
this poem really touched my heart because my father also is a bluegrass lover, but now custody is to my mom and i only see him every other weekend. this passion and feeling put into the poem is inspiring. dont stop writing
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this poem really touched my heart because my father also is a bluegrass lover, but now custody is to my mom and i only see him every other weekend. this passion and feeling put into the poem is inspiring. dont stop writing
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from XCBLG
A very nice tribute to your dad. Music played by those who love to make it relieves strife for the player and the listener as well. I love "banjo'd." You and your family were fortunate. XCBLG
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A very nice tribute to your dad. Music played by those who love to make it relieves strife for the player and the listener as well. I love "banjo'd." You and your family were fortunate. XCBLG
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ....
What a love word-picture you have painted here as a tribute to your dear Father. Music is always such a
great reminder covering all the moods of human life.
There is nothing that I would suggest changing and, as this is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ....... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ....
What a love word-picture you have painted here as a tribute to your dear Father. Music is always such a
great reminder covering all the moods of human life.
There is nothing that I would suggest changing and, as this is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ....... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from LadyMary
This is a lovely tribute to your father and his talent. I can just hear him strumming that banjo enjoying the smile on your face as you listened. Rhyme and meter are very good, and the tribute in memory of a loved one is well placed. Much enjoyed. LadyMary
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This is a lovely tribute to your father and his talent. I can just hear him strumming that banjo enjoying the smile on your face as you listened. Rhyme and meter are very good, and the tribute in memory of a loved one is well placed. Much enjoyed. LadyMary
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from mushroom
well i liked this very much, it has a great rhyme and flows so well it makes it so easy to read, you could set this to music, a lovely story
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well i liked this very much, it has a great rhyme and flows so well it makes it so easy to read, you could set this to music, a lovely story
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from elainec4
sixteezkid,
You are certainly on a roll. I love this one. Reminds me of my uncles from western Louisiana. There were five brothers who loved to "pick and grin". Easy to reader. Entertaining. elaine
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sixteezkid,
You are certainly on a roll. I love this one. Reminds me of my uncles from western Louisiana. There were five brothers who loved to "pick and grin". Easy to reader. Entertaining. elaine
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from justmade
I just love the sound of the guitar. I use to know how to play- just the easy stuffs- but now I am not very confident. I loved this tribute and how you told a wonderful story with it. Well done Brooke.
Much love,
Justmade.
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I just love the sound of the guitar. I use to know how to play- just the easy stuffs- but now I am not very confident. I loved this tribute and how you told a wonderful story with it. Well done Brooke.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008