Precious Gems: An Anthology
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Carved in Stone"A Rhyming Collection of Treasured Works
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Comment from lee_poe
How movingly expressed. The message comes through sharp and clear.
How sad for for him, for you.
I've tried to show you care and love, while also giving room
Yet knowing that the time was short, your leaving always loomed
I feel your pain
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2008
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How movingly expressed. The message comes through sharp and clear.
How sad for for him, for you.
I've tried to show you care and love, while also giving room
Yet knowing that the time was short, your leaving always loomed
I feel your pain
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2008
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Thanks so much for your great review and comments lee_poe! Having taken this boy in when he was 13, I always knew deep down that he'd never really be a part of the family as such. Too much had happened to him beforehand. But hopefully when he does go, he'll always come back - preferably for reasons other than just wanting something! Again, thanks, and bless you. xoxoxo