BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "North Country Magic"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from jmdg1954
Phew... I almost wasn't able to review your wonderful post. My membership expired over the weekend. I'm good for another year.
If only the little reindeer had a red nose. Haha. Kidding.
Your poem of so few words told a story that lets the readers mind wander in many directions. Well at least it did to my mind.
I loved the poem and the picture. Both very in season.
Great post, sis.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Phew... I almost wasn't able to review your wonderful post. My membership expired over the weekend. I'm good for another year.
If only the little reindeer had a red nose. Haha. Kidding.
Your poem of so few words told a story that lets the readers mind wander in many directions. Well at least it did to my mind.
I loved the poem and the picture. Both very in season.
Great post, sis.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Phew is right. What would I have done without you here? I thank you for renewing your membership, for the very sweet comments and for being you, dear brother. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Nicki.B
This is just gorgeous, I love the imagery and the 7-7 compliments it perfectly.
I must contribute to the book it looks amazing what a fabulous idea it is!
Well done what beautiful entry!!
Best Wishes
Nicki xoxox
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This is just gorgeous, I love the imagery and the 7-7 compliments it perfectly.
I must contribute to the book it looks amazing what a fabulous idea it is!
Well done what beautiful entry!!
Best Wishes
Nicki xoxox
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Nicki, and thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. I will be watching to see if you do it. Love, Debi
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You're very welcome!! Thanks Debi xox
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Debi, a very nice poem. I like the picture. Nice choice for the poem. I'm curious. What is the book of tenga poems? Can anyone join this? Very good writing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Debi, a very nice poem. I like the picture. Nice choice for the poem. I'm curious. What is the book of tenga poems? Can anyone join this? Very good writing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Yes, Brenda. On the bottom of my poem it will say add chapter and multi author book. You have to look at the last one posted to see if it was 7-7 which mine is. Two lines of seven syllables or if the last poem was 5-7-5, they go every other one. Click on the little arrows at the top of the page to see which was the last structure used and then click on add a chapter on the bottom and do the opposite one. It is really easy. Just remember, 5-7-5, then 7-7, 5-7-5, 7-7. Does that make sense? For instance if I was the last one posted then you would do a 5-7-5. I wanted the 7-7 so I waited till someone else posted. So look up to see the arrows to click on to see what is the last chapter. Click on bottom to see add chapter. Easy as that. Sorry for repeating myself. But I never know if I am explaining it right. Thanks and I will be watching to see if you do it.
Thanks for the awesome comments! Debi
Comment from harmony13
A lovely nature based poem! The author's words are uplifting, descriptive
and creative. I thought about Reindeers, and they are magical especially during the Christmas Season. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of
this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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A lovely nature based poem! The author's words are uplifting, descriptive
and creative. I thought about Reindeers, and they are magical especially during the Christmas Season. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of
this poem.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Maria, thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Tim Margetts
I always see these when I can't post as I am over my tiny post cap.
But maybe thats for the best as my contribution may not fit the mood of the Renga.
What do you think Debi?
Deer or reindeer feast?
Which one will savour the most?
Rudolf or Bambi?
Tim x
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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I always see these when I can't post as I am over my tiny post cap.
But maybe thats for the best as my contribution may not fit the mood of the Renga.
What do you think Debi?
Deer or reindeer feast?
Which one will savour the most?
Rudolf or Bambi?
Tim x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Well, Tim, that depends if you mean that the reindeer are feasting or if someone is feasting on the reindeer? LOL.
I find it kind of comical myself but then I have that sense of humor.
The fact that you wrote savour the most makes me want to steer (do you like what I did there with my spelling?) you away from doing one. You never know when everyone might turn on you. Hahahaha!! Just kidding.
Love your sense of humor, deer friend. (Sorry, I can't help myself with the spelling) you bring out the fun and that is what I love most is fun.
Thanks for the day brightening review and the big smile. You are the best!
Love, Debi
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Your puns are seriously awfoal, now I need to gallop out of here before I get strung up, your witticism truly guts me and I am left haunched in submission.
Tim x
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I know, but hope you had as much fun as I did. LOL.
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But of course. I love puns.
Hey, that's an idea.
How about we create a new puntastic poetry form :)
I need to think on this LOL
Tim x
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Tim, please copy this to your browser and tell me what you think of this poem. I was pretty proud of it as it took a lot of thought.
https://search.app/bZXK9T9P4eSkbiK7A
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Read it, love it, reviewed it.
Tim x
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-You did a good job with your poem.
-Very good seasonal and nature imagery.
-You create a good word picture of the deer
in "north country" where it is cold.
-A very good second line brings out
the "magic" of the season.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-You did a good job with your poem.
-Very good seasonal and nature imagery.
-You create a good word picture of the deer
in "north country" where it is cold.
-A very good second line brings out
the "magic" of the season.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Pam, thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Debi,
Lovely poem and photo! We have elk and deer who live nearby and they are beautiful too. Deer and wild turkey used to congregate near my former apartment building a few years ago.
I've only seen reindeer on TV.
Have a nice holiday, Debi.
Blessings,
Hugs,
Cindy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Debi,
Lovely poem and photo! We have elk and deer who live nearby and they are beautiful too. Deer and wild turkey used to congregate near my former apartment building a few years ago.
I've only seen reindeer on TV.
Have a nice holiday, Debi.
Blessings,
Hugs,
Cindy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Cindy, thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
Well done with this renga poem Debi, you indeed have done a great job with this classic style Japanese style poem dear friend, I'm not sure their's enough room to manoeuvre, but well done, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Well done with this renga poem Debi, you indeed have done a great job with this classic style Japanese style poem dear friend, I'm not sure their's enough room to manoeuvre, but well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Roy, thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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Well done Debi
Comment from Begin Again
While the eleves work and Santa slumbers, the cold winter snow stirs and blows around the reindeer, but come Christmas Eve and the bells of Christmas will ring with happiness and peace for one and all.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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While the eleves work and Santa slumbers, the cold winter snow stirs and blows around the reindeer, but come Christmas Eve and the bells of Christmas will ring with happiness and peace for one and all.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Carol, thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from DonandVicki
I use to own a cabin up in the mountains until a fire wiped it out, in the winter we would see deer like your picture and they looked so majestic. A renga that took me back a few years. Don
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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I use to own a cabin up in the mountains until a fire wiped it out, in the winter we would see deer like your picture and they looked so majestic. A renga that took me back a few years. Don
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Don, that is so sad that yours burned down, as I bet it was so awesome up there. We used to have one in Nisswa, MN in the north woods and it was so beautiful up there.
So, thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi