A Brighter Tomorrow
Giving the Unexpected...23 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
Sometimes just being happy can happen with a simple act of kindness and a little lie. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Sometimes just being happy can happen with a simple act of kindness and a little lie. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Mike...
You should be able to write a feel good story....
You made me feel good with your review and the stars....
I'm smiling and sending you a hug.
Always, Carol
Comment from RodG
What a heartwarming story you have written. I like it a lot because (1) of how you set the scenes the opening paragraph, (2) how you characterize Henry as being immensely compassionate and (3) how the story builds towards a satisfying ending for everyone. Rod
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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What a heartwarming story you have written. I like it a lot because (1) of how you set the scenes the opening paragraph, (2) how you characterize Henry as being immensely compassionate and (3) how the story builds towards a satisfying ending for everyone. Rod
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much, Rod....
I just thought every one could use a little feel-good stories instead of our daily doom and gloom. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. I hope it made you smile.
Smiles, Carol
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It did make me smile.
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That's what counts!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a fine story that falls well within the prompt. It is interesting the way your characters are developed throughout the story, so we come to a closer understanding of their motivations as time moves on. kay
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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This is a fine story that falls well within the prompt. It is interesting the way your characters are developed throughout the story, so we come to a closer understanding of their motivations as time moves on. kay
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much Kay for stopping by to reach this story. I hope it snt a few warm fuzzy vibes your way today. Have a great day!
smiles, Carol