Waist Deep In Summer
latch onto it with all your strength25 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have included the perfect motivational and inspirational statements for the Uplifting Poetry contest. We must fight to hold tight to the summer of our lives, and resist the season's change. Your words are well thought out and presented. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly with your poem, and intensifies your message. Best wishes in the contest.
Question: Under a brighter son...A sun that will burn upon us
(Did you intend two different spellings of the word "sun?"
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You have included the perfect motivational and inspirational statements for the Uplifting Poetry contest. We must fight to hold tight to the summer of our lives, and resist the season's change. Your words are well thought out and presented. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly with your poem, and intensifies your message. Best wishes in the contest.
Question: Under a brighter son...A sun that will burn upon us
(Did you intend two different spellings of the word "sun?"
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
I read your Uplifting poem with interest and focus, and enjoy every bit of it. I love the imagery of summer and the sunshine that comes with the Son of God. Thanks for sharing your work. Good luck in the contest. Take a second look at line six from bottom. I guess you meant 'son' and not 'sun'.
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I read your Uplifting poem with interest and focus, and enjoy every bit of it. I love the imagery of summer and the sunshine that comes with the Son of God. Thanks for sharing your work. Good luck in the contest. Take a second look at line six from bottom. I guess you meant 'son' and not 'sun'.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Your enthusiasm is contagious and your metaphoric write seems to want us to stand and cheer... cheer summertime and life. Great job on this verse and I wish you luck in the contest! I would mention the font is a bit confusing and made me stumble through a few lines. :)
Melissa
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Your enthusiasm is contagious and your metaphoric write seems to want us to stand and cheer... cheer summertime and life. Great job on this verse and I wish you luck in the contest! I would mention the font is a bit confusing and made me stumble through a few lines. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an free verse excellent entry in the Uplifting Poetry! contest. Your poem is rich with powerful metaphorical verses speaking encouraging and uplifting truths.
Do you mean son vs sun in this line
Under a brighter son
A sun that will burn upon us
All the best in the contest,
BB50
Suggestion: Maybe change the color and style of font. It will read better.
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This is an free verse excellent entry in the Uplifting Poetry! contest. Your poem is rich with powerful metaphorical verses speaking encouraging and uplifting truths.
Do you mean son vs sun in this line
Under a brighter son
A sun that will burn upon us
All the best in the contest,
BB50
Suggestion: Maybe change the color and style of font. It will read better.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from Katiemae1977
I definitely found this uplifting. Summer usually represents uplifting things so good call for using it.
This is a great free verse with a touch of prose that put a warming smile upon my face.
Best wishes in the contest!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
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I definitely found this uplifting. Summer usually represents uplifting things so good call for using it.
This is a great free verse with a touch of prose that put a warming smile upon my face.
Best wishes in the contest!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024