Willing Hearts
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Galvin is a jealous dork. It was a wonderful idea to Let Sami join her family for Father's Day. There is no mention of Noah being there, but I assume he was in a protective mode.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Galvin is a jealous dork. It was a wonderful idea to Let Sami join her family for Father's Day. There is no mention of Noah being there, but I assume he was in a protective mode.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Noah was there, she hugged and kissed him, and he even danced with her. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh, darn, I read it but didn't have it sink in that he enjoyed the dance as well.
Comment from Sankey
This was a lovely chapter and so glad she got to spend Father's Day with her Dad. One little miss. "I trust your judgement and (that you)were doing what you thought was best.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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This was a lovely chapter and so glad she got to spend Father's Day with her Dad. One little miss. "I trust your judgement and (that you)were doing what you thought was best.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I have made that correction. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from judiverse
I hope the picnic won't raise suspicions, especially with Sami's sister going to the store. I like that Sami was thinking of Sarah and had her sister get a pregnancy test. Interesting that Galvin had left but immediately turned around and came back. I wonder if he would have told Sami her impetuousness hasn't changed since they last spoke, as it surely hasn't been that long. Galvin doesn't seem to have much confidence in his team, but he doesn't seem to have much personal involvement in what they do. It is a setback that Chen got away, but like Sami I'm sure they'll catch him soon. Excellent dialogue. Sounds rather risky to have her outdoors for a family picnic, but I'm sure Noah has thought of security. judi
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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I hope the picnic won't raise suspicions, especially with Sami's sister going to the store. I like that Sami was thinking of Sarah and had her sister get a pregnancy test. Interesting that Galvin had left but immediately turned around and came back. I wonder if he would have told Sami her impetuousness hasn't changed since they last spoke, as it surely hasn't been that long. Galvin doesn't seem to have much confidence in his team, but he doesn't seem to have much personal involvement in what they do. It is a setback that Chen got away, but like Sami I'm sure they'll catch him soon. Excellent dialogue. Sounds rather risky to have her outdoors for a family picnic, but I'm sure Noah has thought of security. judi
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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They are away from the city, so maybe will be okay. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, what a lovely opportunity this was for Sami to be with her parents. It was a scene wonderfully written. And I gather that Sarah is pregnant. We'll see soon enough. Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Hi Barbara, what a lovely opportunity this was for Sami to be with her parents. It was a scene wonderfully written. And I gather that Sarah is pregnant. We'll see soon enough. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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We'll find out if Sarah is pregnant or not. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Barbara
That was nice that Sami got to see her parents and dance with her dad on Father's Day. I wonder how dangerous it's going to be to get back to their compound I'm not sure it's really a compound. I'm not sure what to call it but it's home.
I'm guessing that Sarah is pregnant because it makes for good drama later on
I don't think Galvin's any longer a threat. Sami put him in his place. Unless he hears about this reunion
I am not sure, but I think somebody will try to kidnap Sami on the way back. Someone who knew of their plans
I look forward to the next chapter
Here voices
"Three voiced said, "Roger that, Boss.""
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Hi, Barbara
That was nice that Sami got to see her parents and dance with her dad on Father's Day. I wonder how dangerous it's going to be to get back to their compound I'm not sure it's really a compound. I'm not sure what to call it but it's home.
I'm guessing that Sarah is pregnant because it makes for good drama later on
I don't think Galvin's any longer a threat. Sami put him in his place. Unless he hears about this reunion
I am not sure, but I think somebody will try to kidnap Sami on the way back. Someone who knew of their plans
I look forward to the next chapter
Here voices
"Three voiced said, "Roger that, Boss.""
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I will change that immediately. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Nice touch. It is refreshing in view of the stress the characters have to have been going through to be able to celebrate a family holiday. A holiday celebration that includes the protective crew as well. You did a very fine job of creating this respite from the everyday grind of a protective custody detail.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Nice touch. It is refreshing in view of the stress the characters have to have been going through to be able to celebrate a family holiday. A holiday celebration that includes the protective crew as well. You did a very fine job of creating this respite from the everyday grind of a protective custody detail.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from BethShelby
What a nice surprise of Sami to get to be with family on Father's day. I like that Galvin came back and apologised He acts as thought he believes Sami and Noah don't want to be around each other. It is good he believes that.
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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What a nice surprise of Sami to get to be with family on Father's day. I like that Galvin came back and apologised He acts as thought he believes Sami and Noah don't want to be around each other. It is good he believes that.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Sami and Noah are an unlikely couple, but it seems to work.
Comment from jim vecchio
A very nice chapter. It was nice for Sami and the family to have some quiet moments together. As we may or may not be getting aq hurricane soon, I suspect this might be the calm before the storm. Worthy of six stars, as always.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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A very nice chapter. It was nice for Sami and the family to have some quiet moments together. As we may or may not be getting aq hurricane soon, I suspect this might be the calm before the storm. Worthy of six stars, as always.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. It is the calm before the storm.
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It literally is, where I am now.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a wonderful escape. I felt like I was being reunited with my own family. The beauty of the picnic made it easy and I could breathe again. I'm glad Galvin returned and cleared the air somewhat, but I still don't completely trust him. A really good addition to this story. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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This was such a wonderful escape. I felt like I was being reunited with my own family. The beauty of the picnic made it easy and I could breathe again. I'm glad Galvin returned and cleared the air somewhat, but I still don't completely trust him. A really good addition to this story. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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I don't trust Galvin either. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
so Noah is loosening the reins a little bid as he begins to understand what Sami needs. It was very generous of him to give her time with her family. And in turn, Sam is seeing another side of him and is softening a little too. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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so Noah is loosening the reins a little bid as he begins to understand what Sami needs. It was very generous of him to give her time with her family. And in turn, Sam is seeing another side of him and is softening a little too. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.