Gold!
More precious than anything, even ...27 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
I can relate to this well crafted poem, Wendy. Enjoy these precious moments. It's such a special relationship. I composed little ditties for the children when they were quite young. They know them by heart.
Thank you so much for posting this delightful, heartfelt short write.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
I can relate to this well crafted poem, Wendy. Enjoy these precious moments. It's such a special relationship. I composed little ditties for the children when they were quite young. They know them by heart.
Thank you so much for posting this delightful, heartfelt short write.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you vvery much, Julia. Yes, such love is treasured in our memories, and it is so uplifting to be loved with such exuberance.
Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
Nothing better than a hug and some love from a grandchild. they add a very special light to out world. cute and so precious. Have a great day, Wendy!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
Nothing better than a hug and some love from a grandchild. they add a very special light to out world. cute and so precious. Have a great day, Wendy!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you Carol. So very true. So much joy from these littlies.
You have a great day too! Story first, garden later! Lol.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Gold!, has the proper formatting and acknowledges the thrill of being the recipient of a child's unmitigated presentation of deep affection. So nice.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
This cinquain, Gold!, has the proper formatting and acknowledges the thrill of being the recipient of a child's unmitigated presentation of deep affection. So nice.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you Bill. A lovely review.
Wendy
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very well done, Wendy. My first and only great granddaughter is less than a year old. I can't wait until she puts her arms around me while I am reciting a poem to her.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
Very well done, Wendy. My first and only great granddaughter is less than a year old. I can't wait until she puts her arms around me while I am reciting a poem to her.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Those joys will be with you very soon. It's the most wonderful and uplifting feeling. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Heck, my heart would also overflow is someone, anyone, would give a hug but history has taught that I am not a person with a "hug me" sign hung on me, and even a shanking hands is challenging. You are lucky.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
Heck, my heart would also overflow is someone, anyone, would give a hug but history has taught that I am not a person with a "hug me" sign hung on me, and even a shanking hands is challenging. You are lucky.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Yes, I am blessed. Little ones are less inhibited with their expressions of love so I'll take it and value it and remember these hugs and declarations of love forever.
Thanks for reviewing!
Wendy
Comment from jmdg1954
Absolutely. When those hugs started with your children and now with the grandchildren as so expertly stated in your poem, there isn't enough gold to buy those words, embrace or heartfelt joy.
Great way to begin my Sunday.
Thank you for sharing.
John
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
Absolutely. When those hugs started with your children and now with the grandchildren as so expertly stated in your poem, there isn't enough gold to buy those words, embrace or heartfelt joy.
Great way to begin my Sunday.
Thank you for sharing.
John
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you John. Yes, it is the most wonderful feeling.
Wendy
Comment from BethShelby
There is nothing like the hugs of a grandchild and having them tell you in their language of love how much mean to them. The is joy that keeps on living in you memory after they've gone back home.Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
There is nothing like the hugs of a grandchild and having them tell you in their language of love how much mean to them. The is joy that keeps on living in you memory after they've gone back home.Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Beth. Much appreciated.
Wendy