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A Bit Out of His Pay Scale

Embarrassed young trainee quits after first day.

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest. Oh no! I hate to laugh at this but it is funny! The things those caregivers must see on a daily basis defies description. You did a great job with your 50 words and ended your story with a humorous punch. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
    Thank you Marilyn. I thought it was funny. My cousin told me some X rated stories from her time working there.
Comment from Nina Sexton
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What a funny story! I imagine you see all sorts of crazy things in the Alzheimer's unit. Little, unforgettable moments in life are simple treasures a writer can make live on forever, making impressions on others. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you Nina. My cousin had a world of funny and and sad stories to tell about working in the Alzheimer's unit.
    Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I am unsure how a guy on a ladder and a nude senior with Alz goes together but it rings funny, especially with the picture chosen. You can be a hoot now and then.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you Tom. I'm glad it rang funny for you.
    Beth
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Yeah, that's probably even a challenge for a VETERAN care worker, let alone a kid there on his first day! Very amusing, um, FLASH fiction (like what I did there, Beth?) and better still because it was based on a true story...which every writer knows is always more hilarious than the made-up stuff!!
xo

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you Rachelle. You're quick with the play on words. He got a pretty good flash.
    Beth
Comment from Begin Again
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The light bulb and his face were turning red! LOL I can fully understand why he didn't think that was the job for him. Cute and fun to read.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you Carol. I'm gad you found my dibble story funny.
    Beth
Comment from jessizero
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I would have been horrified! You did a good job telling this funny story in just fifty words. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Than you Jessi. I sure it horrified the young guy. No wonder he decided this wasn't where he wanted to work.
    Beth