At Home in Mississippi
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi there, BethShelby. Did you ever get your sibling. I think maybe not because of this
"Mother actually wanted more children. Maybe God tried, because years later, she admitted to having a miscarriage when I was a few years old."
I really enjoyed the story about the green man. The entire story was upbeat and entertaining.
Eggcellent work. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Hi there, BethShelby. Did you ever get your sibling. I think maybe not because of this
"Mother actually wanted more children. Maybe God tried, because years later, she admitted to having a miscarriage when I was a few years old."
I really enjoyed the story about the green man. The entire story was upbeat and entertaining.
Eggcellent work. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thank you for a great review. I'm sorry I running so far behind. No I never got my other sibling but it was just as well I didn't because the following chapter showed I changed my my mind about wanting one when I realized I liked being the one who got all the attention. LOL
Beth
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
What a charming story, Beth, and your sense of humor shone through. You were an imaginative little girl, and I'm sure you kept your poor mother on her toes. I can just imagine her trying to explain the whole baby thing to you. I was the baby of the family, and always wanted a baby brother. Unlike you, I was very gender specific, lol.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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What a charming story, Beth, and your sense of humor shone through. You were an imaginative little girl, and I'm sure you kept your poor mother on her toes. I can just imagine her trying to explain the whole baby thing to you. I was the baby of the family, and always wanted a baby brother. Unlike you, I was very gender specific, lol.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thank you so much Rhonda. I'm glad you are finding some of my stories humorous. God might have found my requests hunorous as well.
Beth
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I?m sure you gave him unending joy!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh Beth, how can you recall so much and write this in a style that actually seems like it's coming from you as a child! I still have a smile on my face by the end. You were such an amazingly bright and mischievous little girl. And your mother's rather worried or even stern responses make this even funnier. I didn't notice any errors and this is a virtual six from me. Well done and keep them coming! Debbie
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reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Oh Beth, how can you recall so much and write this in a style that actually seems like it's coming from you as a child! I still have a smile on my face by the end. You were such an amazingly bright and mischievous little girl. And your mother's rather worried or even stern responses make this even funnier. I didn't notice any errors and this is a virtual six from me. Well done and keep them coming! Debbie
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Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. I really love your reviews. You know I enjoy reading all those flattering words. I'm pleased you seem to like reading my stories.
Beth