Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Sunrise at the Dock"Verses of personification
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Comment from hullabaloo22
This is a beautifully descriptive poem. The words capture the changing colors of the sky as dawn begins to break across the water.
A beautiful picture to accompany the poem too.
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This is a beautifully descriptive poem. The words capture the changing colors of the sky as dawn begins to break across the water.
A beautiful picture to accompany the poem too.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was just beautiful. It was like having an artist's eye view of the breaking dawn. The descriptive passages were woven flawlessly with the meaning of the poem. Be in the moment. Enjoy where you are now and don't borrow tomorrow's trouble. Breathtakingly beautiful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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This was just beautiful. It was like having an artist's eye view of the breaking dawn. The descriptive passages were woven flawlessly with the meaning of the poem. Be in the moment. Enjoy where you are now and don't borrow tomorrow's trouble. Breathtakingly beautiful. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Gretchen!! Xo
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed your sonnet as it put me there on the dock at sunset and later at sunrise. The Speaker cautions us to enjoy the moment and not think ahead to "what tomorrow brings." Your rhythm is flawless and your imagery is noteworthy. Rod
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I enjoyed your sonnet as it put me there on the dock at sunset and later at sunrise. The Speaker cautions us to enjoy the moment and not think ahead to "what tomorrow brings." Your rhythm is flawless and your imagery is noteworthy. Rod
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from gansach
This is a lovely entry for the No Restrictions competition. The illustrating picture perfectly reflects the poem's descriptive words urging us to not worry what the day may bring, but enjoy the present moment of a fresh beginning. Beautiful imagery.Good luck!
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This is a lovely entry for the No Restrictions competition. The illustrating picture perfectly reflects the poem's descriptive words urging us to not worry what the day may bring, but enjoy the present moment of a fresh beginning. Beautiful imagery.Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your words are even more beautiful than the image you have chosen to illustrate them. You not only paint exquisite imagery with your words, but you deliver an important message. Excellent in every way.
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Your words are even more beautiful than the image you have chosen to illustrate them. You not only paint exquisite imagery with your words, but you deliver an important message. Excellent in every way.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you so very much, my friend!
Xo
Jess
Comment from zanya
This is a beautiful, wistful Sonnet reminding the reader of the sheer beauty of the dawn of a new day . 'The fading grays give way to golds and blues,'
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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This is a beautiful, wistful Sonnet reminding the reader of the sheer beauty of the dawn of a new day . 'The fading grays give way to golds and blues,'
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful review!! Xoxo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a well written sonnet that gives good advice. We need to embrace the moment and not miss a single ounce of the beauty of the world due to worry about the future.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
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Hi
This is a well written sonnet that gives good advice. We need to embrace the moment and not miss a single ounce of the beauty of the world due to worry about the future.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from Nicki Nance
This sweet, organic poem is so much more than nod to the heavens for a job well done. The underpinning of time passing by without acknowledgment is an invitation to live mindfully. Well done.
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This sweet, organic poem is so much more than nod to the heavens for a job well done. The underpinning of time passing by without acknowledgment is an invitation to live mindfully. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An engaging poem with great use of rich imagery and language.
The verse flows well and brings a clear picture to the mind's eye.
I especially like the first stanza and ending couplet.
Blessings
Shirley
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An engaging poem with great use of rich imagery and language.
The verse flows well and brings a clear picture to the mind's eye.
I especially like the first stanza and ending couplet.
Blessings
Shirley
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from zanni
I enjoyed the smooth and mellow tones of this poem.
The visual imagery is also very strong.
The invitation to Be Here Now is well articulated.
I'll meet you at that dock along with Otis Redding.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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I enjoyed the smooth and mellow tones of this poem.
The visual imagery is also very strong.
The invitation to Be Here Now is well articulated.
I'll meet you at that dock along with Otis Redding.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you! Xo