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Comment from Lisasview
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Hi there Debi,
I think I know which Jessica you are talking about but I am not sure???
I read a poem from Jessica about a sister who died... so I am thinking that this is about here???
It is such a great poem...
Lisa

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Hi Lisa, I am sure she is the one you were thinking about. So thanks for the kind words for Jessica and her poem. I appreciate your kindness so very much, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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What a lovely poem you have written for Jessica. Death of a loved one is such a horrible pain, it is hard to feel better for a long time, but two little girls and a loving husband are people to remind her of life.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Carol, thanks for the kind words for Jessica and her poem. I appreciate your kindness so very much, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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This is such a sweet happy birthday song with a cadence of sadness pulsing through it. Congratulations to dear Jessica for her gift with words and Happy Birthday!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Verna, thank you for all the kind words for Jessica and her poem. She really is a talented woman and sweet friend. Just like you, my dear sister in Christ. Love ya, Debi
Comment from jessizero
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This was a lovely poem for Jessica! I think it's kind of neat that her name is close to mine, and I have a sister named Kelli while she had one named Kelly. I am sorry for her loss, though. I can't imagine the pain she must feel. Your poem was beautiful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you and Jessica!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Wow, that is amazing coincidences, as both names are almost identical. And two beautiful friends name Jess or Jessi is a double blessing for me.

    And thanks Sweetie for the awesome words for her poem. It is so easy to write for people I care about. And if I remember right, yours is the middle of July sometime, right? If you want another, please let me know. I am always happy to do it.
    Thanks again, my dear dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
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You have crafted another beautiful and informative poem. I enjoy getting to know fellow FanStorians through your caring and loving poetry. I appreciate the time, work, and detail you put into each person's story. You have become a valuable asset to this website and we all love you. You KNOW I love your beautiful picture.

To Jessica: I wish you much success with your writing and hope you have the best birthday and year ever.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Lorraine, you are among the most beautiful souls and sweethearts I have ever known. Gosh, I love you and appreciate all your lovely words. Thank you with all my heart!! Love, Debi
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Lorraine, you are among the most beautiful souls and sweethearts I have ever known. Gosh, I love you and appreciate all your lovely words. Thank you with all my heart!! Love, Debi
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Oops, I pushed that save button too many times. Or else I just am doubly thankful for you. LOL
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to Jessica Wheeler with us. She is truly a gifted poem and a really wonderful person. I will be sure to wish her Happy Birthday. You, my dear friend, thank you for being a special angel to us all.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    You, my sweet messenger Angel, are so appreciated. I heard about what you send the people and you are so thoughtful. I thank you for the kind review and words too, my wonderful friend. Love ya, Debi
Comment from gansach
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Another lovely birthday/biographical poem which you do so well. I love Jessica's poetry which is always deeply moving, but I'm getting to know my fellow FanStory writers through your poems, too. Thanks for that! You have a kind, compassionate personality and it shows in your poetry. Best wishes, Debi!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Hello again, Gail and thank you with all my heart for the sweet review and words. You are so kind. I will be over to look at some of your work very soon and I will fan you at that time, and thanks again, my new friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
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The information in this helps explain the depth in her poetry. This was such a wonderful and calming poem. I do enjoy her beautiful writing. And I don't think I need to say this, but I will, I really enjoy your writing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Oh, my dearest and sweetest Gretchen, thank you for saying it. I know this poem is forJessica and her special day and has such a beautiful style. She and I have been so close since the day she came. But it still is reassuring to hear that I did a good job on her poem. Thank you my very wonderful friend. You are so special to me. Love you, dearly!!! Debi
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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I can't say it enough- you are an Angel! I love every word of this, and I feel so incredibly honored by it. And that picture!? It's breathtaking! Thank you, my wonderful friend. I'm so lucky to know you!
Xoxoxo
Jess

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Oh, sweetheart, you are so welcome. I am so tickled that you love it, but my first day that I post is always finding little things that I could improve on, and so if you read it again it may be a little different. However, I think they are all improvements. I think you may like it better now.

    So you didn't think that I would do your poem without the cheek to cheek reference, did you. And I hope you know that I count myself as one of those loved ones in your life. I have since the beginning because I still believe God puts certain people in our lives for a reason.

    It was my hope by telling about your sister that way and then that you write about your loss, it would help people to understand better those pieces.

    I tried to do a short eight syllable poem for you but you had too much to tell that was so interesting, so that is why you got the long version. LOL.
    You are just too popular and enquiring minds wanted to know.

    And I hope you know how much I appreciate you entrusting me with the details of your fascinating life. I tried to use the right things in the right places and tell some discreetly without a lot of details where it was more delicate.

    Lastly, Happy Birthday, my beautiful friend and I hope this is the best one ever, and I pray that our special friendship will always allow us to dance cheek to cheek. Love always! Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Hi Debi,
Thank you for your poem about one of my favorite writers. Jessica is a sweetheart and very talented. I actually didn't know that about her sister. Thank you for sharing that with us, as well as the rest of her story. It's good to see young writers on this site.

Much love,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Rhonda, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this beautiful review and words. You are so thoughtful and Jessica will also love all your kindness. Thanks also for the six stars, my sweet and wonderful friend. Love, Debi