Soul-Searching
Where you hope to end up requires deep thought.34 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words have an excellent message! They makes a lot of sense
to me. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and
compliments these words well.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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The author's words have an excellent message! They makes a lot of sense
to me. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and
compliments these words well.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for an excellent review. I'm very please that you liked it.
Beth
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You said it! Not only did you say it clearly but with alliteration built right in. Introspection leads to the destination and all the others that come between the two have to be there too.
I love the signposts that say this way, that way, and another way. This speaks loud and clear about the need to think things through and do thorough research before joining in.
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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You said it! Not only did you say it clearly but with alliteration built right in. Introspection leads to the destination and all the others that come between the two have to be there too.
I love the signposts that say this way, that way, and another way. This speaks loud and clear about the need to think things through and do thorough research before joining in.
Jesse
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Jesse. I'm so pleased you like my poem that you feel it it worthy of six star is icing on the cake. I enjoyeed you comments.
Beth
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Yes, Beth, it's a worthy concept that deserves a six-star.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A great visual to fit your 6 word poem about soul searching. Decisions can be very difficult, sometimes, and we resist change. But with well considered introspection, decisions are better able to arrive at their rightful destination. Great alliteration! Good luck in the contest! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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A great visual to fit your 6 word poem about soul searching. Decisions can be very difficult, sometimes, and we resist change. But with well considered introspection, decisions are better able to arrive at their rightful destination. Great alliteration! Good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Debbie, I'm pleased you understand what I was trying to say with six words.
Beth
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, that is really deep, Beth!!
I think we all stand at that crossroads from time to time and try to decide which way. Sometimes no way really sounds right, but the use of Insight is a great way to look at these decisions when they come. Gain insight first, then make the decision as that will determine your destination.
Well penned, my friend!
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Wow, that is really deep, Beth!!
I think we all stand at that crossroads from time to time and try to decide which way. Sometimes no way really sounds right, but the use of Insight is a great way to look at these decisions when they come. Gain insight first, then make the decision as that will determine your destination.
Well penned, my friend!
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Rhonda. I'm so pleased you get what I was hoping to say.
Beth
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Yay!! Glad I got it!!
Comment from lyenochka
This is so clever! I love it! And you made both lines alliterative. We do have to go through introspection in order to gain insight and our decisions determine where we go from there. I think this should do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This is so clever! I love it! And you made both lines alliterative. We do have to go through introspection in order to gain insight and our decisions determine where we go from there. I think this should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Helen. I'm so pleased you like this. I didn't thinkI wanted to tackle trying to do something with so few words
I'm pleased you feel it makes sense.
Beth
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I think you did a super job! I didn't want to tackle it either. 😊💞 Glad you did!!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow! That was great!
Really good job with only 6 words. Amazing, there's only one thing that can be done about. Such a great problem is this. I hope you have a awesome day!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Wow! That was great!
Really good job with only 6 words. Amazing, there's only one thing that can be done about. Such a great problem is this. I hope you have a awesome day!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Lea. I'm always thrilled with those six stars.
Beth
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I was thinking, "insight invites introspection" would match your second line of alliteration across the three words.
Either way, a thoughtful summation as to how we get to where we most want to end up in life.
Good luck.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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I was thinking, "insight invites introspection" would match your second line of alliteration across the three words.
Either way, a thoughtful summation as to how we get to where we most want to end up in life.
Good luck.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Pam. I had invites there to begin with and it improved it poetically but I 'invites' is just means suggests. I wanted a stronger word. I might try another word and see if it works
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not making a decision is making a decision too. I have known people who can't decide, yet that in itself is a decision. I enjoyed reading this contest entry and want to wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Not making a decision is making a decision too. I have known people who can't decide, yet that in itself is a decision. I enjoyed reading this contest entry and want to wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barbara. I find it hard to consider six words a poem but I didn't to try entering all the free to enter contest. You are right. Not deciding amounts to a decision whether we admit it or not.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all have to make decisions in life and some of them can be life changing. Keeping a level head and a wise outlook helps, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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We all have to make decisions in life and some of them can be life changing. Keeping a level head and a wise outlook helps, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I appreciate the review.
Beth
Comment from Sally Law
Great little poem in an economy of words, my friend. Well written and illamd illustrated for a ribbon, I suspect. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest. Sal XOs
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Great little poem in an economy of words, my friend. Well written and illamd illustrated for a ribbon, I suspect. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest. Sal XOs
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Sally. I can't conceive of six words being a poem but I do appreciat your review and comments.
Beth