Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully told story, Gretchen! As ever this is an absolute joy to read and I wouldn't change a thing. The dialogue is all so credible and every character rings true. The messages being conveyed through Jamison and Iris are of course compatible and there continues to be this very warming harmony between the two, both deriving comfort and strength from each other. Well done! Debbie
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
Thank you, Debbie. I'm trying to throw in some humor to lighten the heavy subject and sadness. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Gretchen
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 12-Aug-2023
The humour is always good and welcome - I should have mentioned that. Iris' response is so beautifully typical of her:)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
You're good. I just think humor plays such an important part in life, even in tragedy. Thanks so much.