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International Fairy Day

A holiday

36 total reviews 
Comment from Eleri
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I do like this poem - it is cute and amusing and reads well throughout. The rhythm is consistent and the rhyming has been well thought out. Unfortunately I did not see any fairies of gnomes yesterday but one of my cats is quite pixieish (?) - does that count.
Eleri

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Hi Eleri,
    Thank you for the positive analysis. Yes, I think a pixieish cat does count. Thank you for a fun review.
    Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Your notes are appreciated, and I enjoyed
learning about International Fairy Day.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good examples of those who are
celebrating this day in verse one.
-I like how the muse is inspired, and
there is a lot of activity that you will miss if you aren't quick!
-A very good concluding verse, as well.
-Thanks for sharing this lighthearted poem; we need more like it!!!
-Happy Fairy Day, too.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
    Hi Pam,
    Thank you for the detailed review. Who knew there was such a holiday? Next year, I'll have to be better prepared for it.
    I appreciate your kind comments and support.
    Debi
reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Jun-2023
    You are very welcome, Debi. I appreciate your reply. We could have dress up day for the big event on FS next year😊
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
    That would be fun!
reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Jun-2023
    Agreed😊
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I love your author's notes:-) June 24 is also my husband's birthday, I'll have to let him know that he shared it with fairies.

I rarely give a six to poetry, but I just love this. When I read poems, I read them aloud - searching for the rhyme and rhythm of the words. This just danced as I read it. And what an image you create for us in the first stanza.

Perhaps now I believe also!

Well done.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
    Hi Pam,
    I am honored by your comments and the six star rating for this poem and the author notes.
    I hope you enjoyed an enchanted day with your husband for his birthday.
    Have a wonderful day.
    Debi
Comment from Lisasview
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Oh my goodness!!!!! I had no idea there was a national Faerie Day.... love it.... I wrote a poem about Faeries... maybe I will post it....one day.
I grew up believing in Faeries....because of my mother, who said that as a child she would go out early in the morning and search the trees for faerie
rings...
Lisasview, new to this site

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Hi Lisaview,
    It's nice to meet you. Welcome to FanStory.
    I didn't know there was an International Fairy Day either, until I stumbled across it on the National Day Calendar.
    Do post you poem. I'd love to read it.
    Thanks for sharing your experience with the fairy world through your mother.
    Have an enchanted day.
    Debi
reply by Lisasview on 29-Jun-2023
    Are we fans? If so then you will be able to see it when I finally post it...
    Lisa
Comment from damommy
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I believe in fairies, and love reading about them. This is a great poem, very enjoyable to read. No doubt a fairy started National Fairy Day. I didn't know about it until I read your delightful poem.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Hi damommy,
    I didn't know about it either until I read it that afternoon. I love fantasy and mythology so had to let everyone know about the holiday. I'm glad you believe. Have an enchanting day.
    Debi
Comment from Wendy G
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Beautiful poem celebrating fairies and all things of fantasy and the world of the imagination. Beautifully written and presented. An enjoyable read. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Hi Wendy,
    Thank you for the kind comments and encouragement. Have a wonderful day.
    Debi
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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Parties will go on, all the banshees, gnomes and pixies dance and play until the sirens ring. They all disappear hiding under the mushroom.

Do you think they will party again? I believe they will.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Hi Goodavicechan,
    I believe they will party again, too. Thank you for the fun comments. I appreciate you stopping by.
    Debi
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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National fairie day is celebrated all over the world! I am not sure if I believe it or not but I like to imagine there is a world of fairies who dance and sing with abandon. I love the prospect of fairies and leprechauns who live in the underworld and have a life all of their own.
Thanks for sharing this day of fairies and I hope we all can live as one!
Jesse

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Hi Jesse,
    Thank you for a fun review. It is fun to think the fairy world is having a grand party. I so agree with your last sentence. May we all live as one! Thanks for stopping by.
    Debi
reply by Jesse James Doty on 28-Jun-2023
    Thanks, Debi.
    May we all live as one!
    Jesse
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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A very lighthearted and delightful read. Excellent children's poem. Your rhyme is right on and the subject is very pleasing. Sounds like you might have a touch of Irish. Very well done. Willie












 Comment Written 24-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
    Hi Willie,
    Thank you for the kind comments and analysis. A touch of Irish, well, if I go back several generation there is a bit. I appreciate the six star rating and the fun remarks.
    Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
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They seem to have a day for everything. But this one is fun and whimsical. Fairies are quite popular now. Even so far as to have a day of their own. Great rhyming and a fun poem to read. You have upped the magic in this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
    Hi Gretchen,
    Thank you for the fun comments about the fairies and about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement.
    Debi